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Killah Bwoy 04-19-04 08:57 PM

killah bwoy vs c_r_e_a_m
 
aiight lets go
10 lines
you spit first
no cv,dr or biting
good luck
if you win you'll automatically be in the crew
lets go

B_Loco 04-19-04 10:15 PM

10 lines.....iight

ay0

im b0ut ta "Smash This Cat" like "Felinez Crossing Busy Streets"...
kuz da "Road" iz tough if u tryin ta reach a ya "Destination" of a win battlen me....
0ff top,imma "Handle" dis kid like im "Dribblen Balls"....
and dont be a "Baby" and start "Dribblen and Cryin" when u get this loss....
ya team wont be able ta back-you...
so i doubt if ya crew members wanna step,kuz dey dont wanna reinact-you...[lose like u are]
do New York think Killa gone win? Nope! so put ya hands-down...
i'll put ya "City" in a "Skillet and Fry" since u callin it "Ham-Town".....
u'z a h0m0 gettin raped-wit-brooms,ass-wit-wounds...
no need ta blast-this-fool,like "Used Condoms" this Bwoy is trashy-too....

Killah Bwoy 04-19-04 11:06 PM

cream's dick is like his flow because both he can't find..../
Turn quick,rhymes too hot for your eyes, now you and stevey wonder have somethin in common,you both hittin keys BLIND..../
Rippin kids up,droppin fire,while this kids purposly droppin'-the-soap/
cant even take cream to church anymore 'cause he won't stop grabbin'-the-pope/
You can tell wishin wells dont work,cuz this kid spent 200 pennies hopin-to-win/
Razor sharp lyrics cut you in half,oops i jus committed a sin, droppin losses,like osmama droppin bombs,and i jus did it again/
Laughin as i watch cream burn in my verse/
dawg no need to hide the evidence we already know you a gurl so stop burnin-ya purse/
why'd i spit my last 8 lines i already ripped this kid with my first 2 punchlines/
runnin over this bitch like a fat kid when its lunchtime

kinda wack but its all good

iamthatdude87 04-19-04 11:17 PM

wow this battle was good but cream made it weak u need to elevate and come harder aight no hate but my vote goes to killa

accomplishment 04-19-04 11:17 PM

Ohhhhh heated man ......

C_R_E_A_M... Came hard Flowed Like Whoa and punches nice nice...i was feelin ya multi's..personals that makin me go OH SNAP.... but yo hot verse... there i always room for elevation...

Killa Bwoy.. Hot verse y'know i've seen better from you even though your new to the site you droppin hot shit..punches hit hard but a few of em were played like osama droppin bombs...but yo hot shit just elevate

vote CREAM nice vers both ya'll close one

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:Krysis: 04-20-04 07:57 AM

my 2 pennys....

Cream...

im b0ut ta "Smash This Cat" like "Felinez Crossing Busy Streets"...
kuz da "Road" iz tough if u tryin ta reach a ya "Destination" of a win battlen me....
^^^
not a bad opener but didnt ryme, i c what u were sayin tho...

other than that ure verse was pretty average, u need work on ya flow and creativitie..

u'z a h0m0 gettin raped-wit-brooms,ass-wit-wounds...
no need ta blast-this-fool,like "Used Condoms" this Bwoy is trashy-too....
^^^
wack finisher, i dont think u know what u were writin....

Killa..

Turn quick,rhymes too hot for your eyes, now you and stevey wonder have somethin in common,you both hittin keys BLIND..../
Rippin kids up,droppin fire,while this kids purposly droppin'-the-soap/
cant even take cream to church anymore 'cause he won't stop grabbin'-the-pope/
^^^^
kinda sick opener.....

why'd i spit my last 8 lines i already ripped this kid with my first 2 punchlines/
runnin over this bitch like a fat kid when its lunchtime
^^^
funny finisher...

overall the verse was short but in some parts sweet, not bad....

so my vote goes to killa,better overall.....

Enygma 04-20-04 08:24 AM

When I read Creams Verse I thought that killah was gonna take it but he came kinda weak this time. All he spit was gay punches and none of them really hit hard at all. Cream had a few punches that never really stuck. He was worried too much about havin some structure and he lost flow and punches in the process.........

This was a tough one but my vote has gotta go to Killah.......

Killah Bwoy 04-20-04 08:49 AM

i came weak cuz i have 3 battles..ill have writers block...i write to my opponents skill level

Black Thief 04-20-04 09:06 AM

My opinion....CREAM had tha ability to be nice...but he fails im b0ut ta "Smash This Cat" like "Felinez Crossing Busy Streets"...
kuz da "Road" iz tough if u tryin ta reach a ya "Destination" of a win battlen me....
0ff top,imma "Handle" dis kid like im "Dribblen Balls"....
and dont be a "Baby" and start "Dribblen and Cryin" when u get this lossto finish his punches...."
u could have done better4
Killa Bwoy uwas aiight...I cant tell u kinda burnt out though"
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cream's dick is like his flow because both he can't find..../
Turn quick,rhymes too hot for your eyes, now you and stevey wonder have somethin in common,you both hittin keys BLIND..../
Rippin kids up,droppin fire,while this kids purposly droppin'-the-soap/
cant even take cream to church anymore 'cause he won't stop grabbin'-the-pope/ "
that was the only hot lines on ya shit....but u prevailed over Cream so u get my vote

E Looch 04-20-04 09:51 AM

pretty good battle

cream opener would have been pretty tight if you would have ended it better had good wordplay in it same with the closer end it better set them up good but dont finish that good overall decent verse a few things i liked just work on finishin your punches better
best lines
do New York think Killa gone win? Nope! so put ya hands-down...
i'll put ya "City" in a "Skillet and Fry" since u callin it "Ham-Town".....

killah you need to work on structure the opener was opener was pretty tight nicely worded closer wasnt really that good not a real good punch or anything in it overall pretty good verse had some good punchs and personals
best lines
cream's dick is like his flow because both he can't find..../
Turn quick,rhymes too hot for your eyes, now you and stevey wonder have somethin in common,you both hittin keys BLIND..../

vote killah


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