beater vs. M.F.P
 

13 lines max
no d/r votes

no hatin



u spit first!

u cant rap like i do ull be on american idol and be singin pop songs and crap like that and ull be losin it so bad while ill be all ovr the place and ull c my face whr ever u go so at least one thin g u know ull be a ho

American Idol? ha wat a joke....
i would punch u, but u get hurt wit one poke......
after my rap is done u'll be gettin booed.....
then u'll be cryin cuz ur sister's gettin sued....
ur rap sux, but wat do u expect from a dude like u.....
cuz all u like to do is poo.....
i'll be rollin in my twenty fours....
while u'll be sittin on ur stupid doors......
like i said while i'll be rappin....
u'll be crappin.....

holla

Lol this battle was weak as hell yall

Punches: None
Flow: MFP
Vocab: None
Multis: None
Structure: MFP
Opener: None
Closer: None

Maan overall this battle was really WHACK. both yall needa elevate on some real.My vote went to MFP cuz he rhymed better,even tho his/her verse was still garbage.

stay up

yo i'm waitin for dis game to get over

i know it wasn't some nice shit but i saw this kid's verse and jus put somethin down

THIS was the worse battle ive eva seen!!!!!! are you guys/girls white cuz thats my prediction.... i was gonna vote but forget it .... a waste of time

ok i wont lie this battle sucked
breakdown for beater: u suck just quit do ur self a favor
overall 9/30
your shit was wack that wasnt even a battle verse
that sucked

breakdown for mfp
overall 15 /10 capable of better
best line:American Idol? ha wat a joke....
i would punch u, but u get hurt wit one poke......
this battle was crap all and all
my vote mfp

is this the battle??? i understand that maybe you guys are new but shit one of the worst battles i've ever read on this board m.f.p wins this easy i'm not even gonna break it down better flow,punches, and it actually had a structure

yeah i know this battle was wak but i didn't want to waste time comin up wit a rap after seein his verse

hahahahahhaha....OK BREAKDOWN....
Opener - MFP...the otha cat's was jus a sentence for a verse...
Flow - MFP...no explanation needed...
Punches - MFP...even tho both verses were weak MFP had an ok punch...
Structure - MFP...no explanation needed...
Closer - MFP...he had a closer....even tho it was weak as hell...

AIGHT EACH PERSON NEEDS TO ELEVATE IN EVERY CATEGORY....

Vote - MFP

Lol, this thread was a joke, right? haha, RIGHT!?

Beater, your entire Verse sucked so bad. You had no structure what so ever and your rhymes/punches/personly's were so weak. At least MFP had a structure and a decent rhyme scheme. Beater, your structure was really bad, I couldn't tell what rhymed and what didn't. You need to suriously ELEVATE KID! MFP, you rhymed and at least you had a flow. But I can see major inmprovement in you too kid. And why did I vote on this?
mfp=vote.