D~Illar~1{vs}quickpunch
 

aight man
set up
will spit shortly

thanks man at least ur tru..if i loose 2 u i wont be mad cause u prolly ill...and if ur good go 2 crews n' collaboration if ur lookin for a crew...spit some hott shit in the furious flows thread where were holdin a lil thing for niggaz 2 hook up...if u good u may get in...THATS FOR ANY1....anyways....spit ur shit i'll spit right after u..pce

keystyle...

~Snow..winter..icecubes ~
Im droppin synomons 2 your shit cuz theres garanteed 2 b nothin hot about it/
and homie if your skills were parachutes u would die cuz u would drop without it/
you couldnt outrap me even if you were a mummified corpse/
and you wouldnt be "hard" even if your family tree was in a petrified forest/
such a pussy,this bitch has a nosebleed for seven days once amonth/
poured liquor on his hand because he wanted to get his date drunk/
I'm going to take a rain check......like it stormed-above-it/
Only way I could fit in his shoe's is if I was borned-with-small-feet/
Known For Crime?..Please Not This Time Cuz I'm Known To Take Boulders And Rock Ya Spine../
And Kid Ya Verse Can't Be Sicker Than Mine...Take 2 Days To Write A Verse That Don't Even Rhyme../
~I'll pack this herbs lunch~
your rekord 6-1...yet u still cant throw a quick punch...


*Hands Quickpunch his ass in the shortest possible time*

dont duck this either.....

nicely spit...i liked ur lines...heres mine

you think your some kind of emcee
think twice before you battle me
pop ur spinal column out, kid I’m poking ur rhymes
he's so predictable my losses was going to be his opening lines
ur flows are harmless, im protected from ur weak flows with a wackness vest
Cause all you did was jerk off, when I said spit ur best
Really ur bold, haha NOOT. gullable bitch believed the lie that i told
u could fall in freezer and still couldn’t spit cold
iv been known to stimulate ur body and mind like an enhancer
couldn’t key better lines than me if you was diagnosed wit cancer (kemo therapy
im assaulting you and that’s resulting to a broken hip and misplaced jaw
i'll chop ur body up and leave it in my freezer so you can say that ur raw
its time to prove myself and scorn my own clone
cause like the first of the litter this bitch was born owned
when u pictured beating me u must have been on coke
damn when ur girl left u it Wasn’t Just ur heart that broke
And The pieces are showin, guess u aint able to Hold’em
But that’s what u get for losing ur virginity over a Cable Modem
he's quick to brag, you never battled, quit fronting
my skill sits besides yours literally it's next to nothing

0k ok nice battle youngins...heres how i break it down

Punches: QuickPunch...."And The pieces are showin, guess u aint able to Hold’em
But that’s what u get for losing ur virginity over a Cable Modem"...<~~lolol dat was funny and hot
Vocab: D...he just used a bigger vocab in some places
Multis: NOne...lol wtf is this I'm going to take a rain check......like it stormed-above-it/
Only way I could fit in his shoe's is if I was borned-with-small-feet/"??? <~~dat was whack
Opener: D got this one wit them first two lines...good shyt
Closer: Quick..."my skill sits besides yours literally it's next to nothing"<~~good
Structure: Quick...easy to read
Flow: Quick...his was easier to read

Vote : QuiCk Punch

hOLLa!

I'M TAKING OUT YOUR FIRST 4 BARS....U HAD 10..HE HAD 6

iv been known to stimulate ur body and mind like an enhancer
couldn’t key better lines than me if you was diagnosed wit cancer (kemo therapy
^^^^^^^ I WAS FEELING THAT ONE......7/10
im assaulting you and that’s resulting to a broken hip and misplaced jaw
i'll chop ur body up and leave it in my freezer so you can say that ur raw
^^^^^^^^^^^NICE SHIT.....8/10
its time to prove myself and scorn my own clone
cause like the first of the litter this bitch was born owned
^^^^^^^ WEAK BAR......5/10
when u pictured beating me u must have been on coke
damn when ur girl left u it Wasn’t Just ur heart that broke
^^^^AGAIN DIDN'T UNDERSTAND THE CONCEPT....5/10
And The pieces are showin, guess u aint able to Hold’em
But that’s what u get for losing ur virginity over a Cable Modem
^^^^ ONE OF THE BEST........8/10
he's quick to brag, you never battled, quit fronting
my skill sits besides yours literally it's next to nothing
^^^^^^^^^^^ BETTER FINISH THEN START..... 7/10
40/60.......LAST 6 BARS

~Snow..winter..icecubes ~<<<<WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT....
Im droppin synomons 2 your shit cuz theres garanteed 2 b nothin hot about it/
and homie if your skills were parachutes u would die cuz u would drop without it/
^^^^^^^^BETTER OPENER THEN HIS.....8/10
you couldnt outrap me even if you were a mummified corpse/
and you wouldnt be "hard" even if your family tree was in a petrified forest/
^^^^^ GOOD ........8/10
such a pussy,this bitch has a nosebleed for seven days once amonth/
poured liquor on his hand because he wanted to get his date drunk/
^^^^^ NOT GOOD 4 A SHORT BATTLE..... 5/10
I'm going to take a rain check......like it stormed-above-it/
Only way I could fit in his shoe's is if I was borned-with-small-feet/
^^^^I LIKED THE FIRST LINE...2'ND DIDN'T RYHME..4/10
Known For Crime?..Please Not This Time Cuz I'm Known To Take Boulders And Rock Ya Spine../
And Kid Ya Verse Can't Be Sicker Than Mine...Take 2 Days To Write A Verse That Don't Even Rhyme../
^^^^ AVERAGE......7/10
~I'll pack this herbs lunch~
your rekord 6-1...yet u still cant throw a quick punch...
^^^^^^^..NOTHING MUCH 2 SAY.......6/10
38/60.......

BY POINTS.....QUICK PUNCH WINS......GOOD BATTLE

ight thanks fot the honest votes...keep it comin yall...thanks...good battle D uppin uppin

*smirks*
0-2 his way


after this battle is done.. set up another battle......U drop 1st....keystyle

yo ppl come vote with honesty....we'll return the favor...pce.....uppin

This was a good battle I think D~Illar~1 started off well then fell off towards the end. Quickpunch Didn't start off as strong but elevated through the whole verse. D if you coulda finished the way you started you woulda had this one hands down but Quickpunch stayed more consistant so he gets my vote.

Vote=Quickpunch

ight thanks for the vote sub...but u forgot to actually cast a vote so can u come back and do that thanks....PEOPLE WERE UPPIN FOR VOTES....WE NEED THIS THREAD CLOSED AS QUICKLY AS IT CAN BE BUT HONESTLY ALSO....SO COME ON VOTE VOTE...WE'LL COME AND VOTE ON UR BATTLES WHEN U NEED US TO...PCE

demobx
 

i gotta go for quick punch the last part made me laugh
illar i liked your punches to especially the first four lines but i feel quickpunch came out stronger illar hit them all where it really hurts they both was aight. My vote goes to quickpunch

D~Illar~1 - you had a nice flow, but i wasn't feelin' some of the rhymin'. You had a better opener, apart from that icecube shit, wasn't feelin' that.

quickpunch - consistent flow with nice rhymin'. Good use of multies kept the flow smooth

'ur flows are harmless, im protected from ur weak flows with a wackness vest
Cause all you did was jerk off, when I said spit ur best'

Loved that line...

vote = quickpunch

yo man people vote on this...we'll return the favor...come on....pce

dillard your first two punches were ite, even though i heard that parachuate one before, but after that you shit barely rhymed and a few things u said weren't puches like that feet thing, dont say stuff like that, that was next to retarded

quick punche u had some puches, and sum i didn't like, and some i heard before, u covered it all, haha, but imma give it too u cuz u had more i liked and that next to nothin one i heard before but its a good one.
this was your good one
Cause all you did was jerk off, when I said spit ur best

vote- quick punch,

drop a vote a battle of mine kids