Puertoricanelly Vs. Real Thorough
 

Aight Dis is how it goes

BLIND SPIT
10-15 bars
30 min time limit
No D/R
No H8r Votes

G/L
When Both Competitors check in is when Time Starts
LATE

Heres My Check In

Ayy man you gonna check in?

Checkin in, and ready to post, I was typing, I'm done and bout to post

Ayo extend the limit for me for like 25 bars, or I can just do you with what I got??? Yo call

its koo how ever many bars you wanna do lets start dis Blind Spit G/L

you definetly a "blind-poet" cuz u have "no vision in your writtens" & your rhymes show-it!
Ya'll wacks can learn alot from this dummy's-acts
The only time this cat "went down in history" was "suckin off his teacher in social studies-class"!
like "skilled samurai's when I cutthroat" I'll have u saying, "slice is sick"
I wouldnt come as wack as your nicest-spit, Someone passed you the mic & my advice-was-quit
"The big picture's coming into perspective" like "developing kodak-photos",
my chrome-claps-homo's,
I'm giving you more of a beating than when your flow-passed-dolo
Your filler is "more obvious" than "neon orange hunting-jackets",
when bars-collide, armed-wit-knives I "cause panic" like niggaz "disrupting-traffic",
your dirt brushes off on your rhymes more than rugs-&-mats,
that's why you always show ignorance & skill deficiency like internet thugs-with-gats,
You're a "crack" and "it shows" like "plumber's fixing-sinks",
you get "downed" when I'm in the "mix" like "bartender's fixin-drinks",
this "cat" thinks he's "god" like an "egyptian-sphinx"
But "holy christ"!, I can "see the bitch in you" like "xrays of christian-chinks"
You couldnt top this one off even if you had cherries-&-whipcream
cuz you getting ripped like a big dicked nigga fuckin a girl who's barely-fifteen!
I'll leave you beyond recognition with hordes of unsheathed-shards
Cuz I "always drop sickness" like "doctor's carrying bacteria in jars" with "clums-y"-arms!

Aight

Real Thorough cant do shit to me hypothetically or lyrically
theres no regrets fo ur life im takin, ill putchu ta sleep wit no opitimy
how you gona win dis battle scared with ur hands over your eyes like a lost child/
u never stood a chance,before you knew me havin dreams bout me killin you wild,
grindja wit ma lyrical file/wit ma rhymes dat stretch longa then the nile
Dis battles ma exercise n u a fat boy that cant do the crunches, cuz ya too busy weepin ova ma metas & punches/
U actin hard as hell in Bitchslapped like Rapbattles is whatchu lead/
Fuck all otha rappas,im the one who you should be scared of cuz not even god could make me bleed/
N u shoulda been smart and checked my past battles/
I was just a baby at the time but now im grown and threw away the rattle/
N no one aint badder than me cuz i climbed da ladda,n left Niggaz sadder wit rhymes heavier than the state of matter/
N u aint worf Jack, i be da first rapper ta rap in tongues in lyrically save ur soul, Den crucify u and watch yur body turn to Charcoal

Nice SPIT ma guy,

ok u both got mad problemz with long barz but sall good kuz it makez the battle rite,

neway... thyz battlez fairly tied up... i neva thought id be piken quantity ova quality... but im given thys one ta real thorough for haven more.

breakdown for real thorough:

flow:nice some multis helped it out good job 8/10

volcab:good job ehre too better then average so many over look this when writing a verse but it's improtant 7/10

punches:nice lines my fav,"The only time this cat "went down in history" was "suckin off his teacher in social studies-class"!" kinda played but overall good job 7/10

overall:22/30

breakdown for puertoricanelly:

flow:even though you tryed to use some multis through the start of it it still seemed off in spots for me not really working 5/10

volcab:good use but you lose points cause it didn't flow 6/10

punches:nothing really open disses and played concepts try harder next time 6/10

overall:17/30

vote--real thorough gets my vote

Real thorough- u came very hard with the punches..i liked the history class line was very hott...but dont use jesus to diss some1..lol...ur flow was good...ur structure is a lil hard to read...but work on it...ur vocab was good..u knew wht u were talkin about i was feeling it

Puorto-every1 uses ur punches...not in the same flow but still shit all rhymes i hate...ur structure and flow wasnt good..neither was ur punches...ur vocab is like every newb always rhyming battle and shit like that...get into it like u like rapping...not being harsh...but go to tutorial to learn to rap...i mean u good but not that great..come harder

im bein honest about this one..i think real thorough took this easily..i mean his shit was just sick..peurtoicanelly..ur shit wasnt that good u need to elevate alot playa fo real...real thoroughs lines myte of been a lil bitch stretched but not too much...

vote: real

Real Througoh ya shit was Crazy a Lil bit Streched but u dat shit off da FLow Structure punches n rhyme wuz all good FAV line:you definetly a "blind-poet" cuz u have "no vision in your writtens" & your rhymes show-it!
Ya'll wacks can learn alot from this dummy's-acts
The only time this cat "went down in history" was "suckin off his teacher in social studies-class"!


DAt Shit WAS ILL SON!!


As for u uhh Puertoricannelly ya shitz WACK ((**~~!NO DESRESPECT!~~**)) ur lines where STRECHED u dint get that shit off i dont have a FAV lin from u but ull get better ull elavate in 5-7 years


REAL

open 9/10
Rhymes 8/10
Structure 9/10
Flow 8/10
PUNCHES 10/10
44/50

Puerto

Open 5/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 5/10
Flow 7/10
PUNCHES 3/10
26/50

VOTE:REAL