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spitfire-+ 04-19-04 11:21 PM

sfire vs airclaire23
 
no d/r votes
no crew hate votes
no bitein
u spit 1st
an 12-16 linz partna so no copyed an pasted present shyte u already sent me :banghead:

violation-to-va2 = Original-weed123 = spitfire-+. All banned for cheating
-strobe

spitfire-+ 04-19-04 11:23 PM

verse due by 6 pm tom ahahhaha

spitfire-+ 04-20-04 05:39 PM

damn dis almost ova

airclaire23 04-20-04 06:40 PM

aight i'm ready here's my verse

man u ain't tryin to see//comin here wantin to battle like a broke mc//
what kind of name is spitfire//when the only thing u spitin is yo blood from mike myers//think u da shit think u can spit but you wrong//i'm gon have yo ass like forest gump when they told him to run home//i'll make ya ass sit down and smoke my weed//next thing ya know ya got cancer and ya look like eve//ya neck and ya back gon get ya raped like kiya//ya like will hung an embarrassment to american idol//i'm gon have u slow jamin like twista to my flow//make ya partna into an overnight celebrity before the night's over

spitfire-+ 04-21-04 03:58 PM

ajhhahahhahahhahahahahhah idol an over didn't even rhyme

spitfire-+ 04-21-04 04:20 PM

ok dis kidd says hes hot stuff but all hes doin is breathin hot air\\
i should just sit him down just to get him scared\\
i spit hot iron on yah ass to leave u in medical care\\
u be screamin out fuck da lord put out my hair\\
then all of u is left is ashes an dust\\
ur parents gonna lay u to rest 6 feet in da earths crust\\
imma be like forest gump an run back to yo house\\
sleep wit yah moms an kick yo ass out\\
hhaha u"ll be all alone callin yah pops\\
don't worry jr ill drop u off at never land,mjs cribs hurrs ur stop\\
dis be my final gone u should be ashamed an do tha right thing\\
put down yah gloves and forfeit yah flow outta da ring\\
imma end dis battle real quick so u can take yo nap\\
u styll a lil punch bitch baby get of dis sit no exceptions no chaps\\

spitfire-+ 04-21-04 04:29 PM

ittte uppin dem vottttttttttttttttttttttttttessssssssssss ill return da favor

spitfire-+ 04-21-04 05:14 PM

ittte uppin 4 dem votttttttttttttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ssssssssssssssssssssssss ill return da favor thanx

spitfire-+ 04-22-04 04:04 PM

yo uppin dem votessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss sssssssssssssss

K-Trin 04-22-04 04:25 PM

man u ain't tryin to see//
comin here wantin to battle like a broke mc//
what kind of name is spitfire//
when the only thing u spitin is yo blood from mike myers//
think u da shit think u can spit but you wrong//
i'm gon have yo ass like forest gump when they told him to run home/
i'll make ya ass sit down and smoke my weed//
next thing ya know ya got cancer and ya look like eve//
ya neck and ya back gon get ya raped like kiya//
ya like will hung an embarrassment to american idol//
i'm gon have u slow jamin like twista to my flow//
make ya partna into an overnight celebrity before the night's over
^
yo,writ ur rhymes like this,it makes reading it more pleasant.That closing was terrible sopposed to talk shit bout ur oppenent and that closing did not.

flow goes to sfire.
imma be like forest gump an run back to yo house\\
sleep wit yah moms an kick yo ass out\\
hhaha u"ll be all alone callin yah pops\\
^this my fav. punch out of all.mabye next time add some multi's if u could

Vote-SFire

violation-to-va2 04-22-04 04:51 PM

itte hur my motive sfire yo shtye was hot it rhymed alil more than his\\
ur punches were alil more at target an made since\\
ahhah yah flow was tight as shyte but u need to elevate
struc was all on topic i was feeling dat

yo airclaire da shyte was not hott it didn't make since an well yo stru was alil off balance
yo flow was alil tight but get orignal ahah start hitting wit sum harder punches

my v goes to sfire

spitfire-+ 04-22-04 09:39 PM

ittttee thaxz ill return da favot shyte uppin dem votes just 3 mo

violation-to-va2 04-24-04 03:13 PM

hahahhahah deezzz kidds need sum votttttttttttes bad

spitfire-+ 04-25-04 07:01 PM

uupppppppppppppinnnnn dezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz vottttttttttttttttttes


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