Tenken vs Lil Nae2
 

aight heres the rules
10-15 lines
no D/R
crew votes
No hate votes
basically house rules

um you spit first...

Tenken ur the next-to-test - youll be put-to-rest on my new victims-list-
keep spittin-shit, but my punches kill when i pass-a-fist-
i murder keys and the dead emerge to see how this killer turns minor threats to emergencies-
i'm "uprootin" ur "hood" roots like sod removal, -
i stab a spoon through u so these kix get "mod approval"-
does this site confuse u or did ur mom just abuse you-
till authorities were forced to remove you-
you'll find your "center - folds" when i'm bendin' you backwards -
like pages in a "playboy mag turn" till your backbone fractures-
i craft words to daggers and stab rappers cause i put "words together" better than "contractors"-
Snipin ya waz easy done in one mission, -
Even if u shifted crucifixes u still wouldn't get ya "point" a "cross" dis "vision"-
even da slightest of my disses wud b quite ample
to dissmantle you and anger you I'll lyrically banter-
I'll laugh at you through diction causing friction to your mission -,
my infliction- shows depiction while you'll drop your contradiction-
get the picture I'm just plain better than you mister- ,
Im a spitter , pure mind `twister-`, I cause mic's to burn and blister-
i show u da match from da blessed by fist - down under my list.-...
i show you spits comin harder den bricks -

Even from da beginnin you spelled "set" wrong, you fuckin queer//
you were first out da spellin bee, kindergarden, second year//
your wordplay is all screwed up, like this countries economy//
you coulnt be an emcee even if the title was handed down from me//
this guy claims he from "da wellz", also saying "hes a gurl if im wondering"//
he must be since he's out da wellz like The bitch outta "The Ring"//
"spitten Bricks" and shit saying "im like contracters"//
with that mug you can Own "A&W" and call yourself a "benefacter"//
This kid will get thrown in the trash like Brenda's baby//
Like tupac you will be goin to heaven, there aint no IF,Buts or maybes//
what now! you cant read, check the first post, says 10-15 lines//
my nig you got 22, you on a "mission" its time for ur resign//
saying "crusifixes" and quotin Tupac youll never elevate, god shall forbid it//
Cut the Wire, Split the Ladder, whatever the circumstances, IM RICK JAMES BITCH//

aight lets get some votes on this shit, we newbies need some winz too ya know

oh sorry bout that, the first line was kinda like an inside joke because when he PMed me back he spelled "set" like "sit"
sorry fo the confusion

i aint new dats u

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Aight... that verse by Lil Nae was creative as hell, great wordplay and pretty nice punches too:

"
you'll find your "center - folds" when i'm bendin' you backwards -
like pages in a "playboy mag turn" till your backbone fractures-"

^^ nice, nice.

Tenken.. you just didn't have anything to match lines like that... that personal in the opener was a bit weak.. also Lil Nae is a she.. says so in her sig...

Anyway.. both of you guys have to work on upping the punches, work a bit on structure, work on getting personals in there.

v/ Lil Nae

Give honest vote on my battle...

uppin fo votes

uhhh that rick james line is OVER PLAYED....get a new1 2 close ur battles

Nae-for a girl i must say ur multies and punches hurt...damn...flow structure was on top...some of ur punches were a it off but thats how it is at times...u came harder and its even harder 2 think u'll win when u spit 1st...cause u have no idea wht the next person will bring...

Tenken-everything was good till the rick james line....overplayed man...second of all it didnt rhyme...ur vocab was there not as near as Nea's tho...but keep spitting...and u sorta bit on her lines or fed from it...and u always wanna be orginal

vote-nae,cause she was original,plus tenken fed...sorry thats how it goes....good luck

PLEASE BOTH OF YALL RETURN THE FAVOR...VOTE HONESTLY ON THIS BATTLE...

QUICKPUNCH VS D~ILLER

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haha i know i didnt have time so i juss threw it in...man that was dumb oh well

uppin for votes

i'm loving the BATTLE..
BEST 4ROM BOTH.....BUT I WAS FEELING TENKEN...A LIL MORE

FLOW-TIE
PERSONAL'S-TENKEN
STRUCTURE-TIE
WORDPLAY-NAE
PUNCHES-TENKEN

TENKEN SHIT WAS FUNNY AS HELL THAT BRENDA ....LINE
WAS ONE OF THE BEST...LOL

GOOD BATTLE 4ROM BOTH..
LIL NAE WAS HARD TO BEAT....
BUT IF ANY VERSE COULD OF DID IT...
TENKEN...

Yo loko tenken won by a long shot."if you win by an inch or a mile. winning is wining." with that said.Temkem had 3 good lines the "kidnegardener", "benifactor" and "the ring" line.

Ya i wasn't feelin any of ur lines.

yo i think tenken took this this was a very good battle...im feelin both your verses but tenken took this one with good punches flow and structure...good battle...it was a close one fo real