demobx vs. Wildfire
 

you spit first
10-30 bars
no dick ridin
no hate votes

drop before 12 am

good luck

Here we go dawgz
 

Im closing ure curtains like these broadways shows
u becoming history once i spit my flow
strike you like a bow an arrow bronx hood apparell
coming for ure chips leave the rest of u dismantled -
totaled send the pieces back to u through postal
ure just a local garbage fire i spread coastal
in my holsta' lies all types of gadgets that are automatic busting off in sporadic attempts as much as an addict let the drugs get at it
this is candid camera extravaganza
got u on the spot like martha stewarts propaganda
they shouldve have banned ya or ya should have never existed
your shit is science fiction spielberg has a better vision-
to rhyme and give me something to challeng my mind
your inclined to get left back still learning to rap green eggs and ham still trying to help u adapt
to live up to big dawgz, your still a pup ive spaded u early now u cant try to fuck

hey sorry it took so long for me to respond...my internet didn't get paid...and i finally got it up and runnin




only way you close my curtains is cause you work under me/
face it, you couldn't be heard if you words were thundering/
blundering, is how you'll feel after i snatch your problem solving ability and leave you wondering/

you got it twisted i'm not becomin history I'm makin it/
your rappin ability is like bein sick during school, you fakin it/

the only logical explanation is that your explanation lacks logic/
now i got you sweatin cause i attacked your nervous system like i was neuro-logic/

listen up folks i'm exposin his verse, it didn't make sense/
so read my rhyme first before you start dealin compliments/

he say he comin for my chips but i don't eat potato/
get off the net gangsta..you should be servin yayo/

and whats this about martha stewart propaganda?/
that rhyme wouldn't make sense to the people of uganda/

i see you like multies, you should try usin substance/
try makin some sense instead of rhymin with abundance/

candid camera extravaganza, what the fuck does that got to do with me/
only thing you've ever been good at is extravagent truancy/
rappin is like a language and your not speakin fluently/
I can see your thoughts and your thinkin "damn i'm glad he's through with me"/

FLOW=WILDFIRE
VOCAB=WILD
STRUCTURE=WILD
MULTIPLES=wild
good battle but i think wil just took this one, hit me backhttp://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123580

While Demobox had alot of flow to his- there were no real direct punchlines, and Overall I just didn't feel his verse too much. Wildfire had much more direct punches- the thoughts were more complete and he did a good job on his disses- while I would have liked to see more name play he definately took the battle on punches alone..... My vote don't count but I vote for Wildfire.

aight man, thanks for the feedback, when you get enough posts to vote you should hit this up

nice battle both yall got decent skillz, you dont see that too much round here....

Dem-

"totaled send the pieces back to u through postal
ure just a local garbage fire i spread coastal "---nice line...

flow was ok and structure was good.

Wildfire--

Had some nice combos,
"only way you close my curtains is cause you work under me/
face it, you couldn't be heard if you words were thundering/
blundering, is how you'll feel after i snatch your problem solving ability and leave you wondering"- prolly ur tightest line
Flows was cool, structure was good...nice drop

wildfires got it with harder punches

Vote= wild
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aight thanks for the vote man....much love....uppin

Aiight Wild came harder and punches landed. His flow was good but I ain't partial to the structure.
Demobox came mediocre and his shit didn't come across as smooth as it could've been

Vote-Wild

Return da favor (In ma Sig)

Wild had good punchlines and i like the chips/potatoe line...
Demobox rap was alright but there werent any amazing punch lines....

I vote Wild

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124254
^^^this is my battle come and return the favor

aight thanks for the vote..i'll hit up your battle next time i'm on

iight casted my vote..... please return favor

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124241

Wildfire had a nice flow and came with some hot punches as well. dem had a pretty good flow, but no real punches, so ima give this to wild
vote -wildfire.