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:Krysis: 04-21-04 07:16 AM

Drunken freestyle
 
yo, I spit illicit flows from were nobody knows "oh shit"..........i froze but from the depths i've rose-
now i'm up-on-top spittin hip-hop-non-stop an ma flow-wont-stop cuz ma flow-wont-flop-
see from day 1 i've been hot like the sun takin emcees out wit ma venomous tongue an ma skripts r so deadly, spittin punches in a meadly, who's ahead of the game? me-

see if i didnt have no mouth i'd spit through ma nose-
an if i didnt have no feet i'd walk on ma toes-
if i didnt have no weed i'd get high on a plane-
an if i couldnt write rap i'd prolly tare out ma brain-
insane or sane? normal or crazy? i cant tell the difference i smoke too much haze see-
an as u read these few lyrix wonderin "what the fuck?" just think to yaself 'i've got all them' so it must b good luck---

^^^^
With help from 'Jack Daniels'....
lmao...

:Krysis: 04-22-04 04:15 AM

oh look............














Uppin....thought u new...

FlowIntelligent. 04-22-04 12:15 PM

ayo nice shyt i was feelin this especially sine jack daniels helped u out lol you came nice with good worplay and multis it flowed right off the tongue easy read nice drop fam ~1~

B_Loco 04-22-04 02:52 PM

pretty decent for a drunk person ta type lol.

universatile 04-22-04 03:07 PM

Nice multiples but Ive always been jaded about people needing to get fucked up to freestyle. If you cant do it sober you aint a true soldier. :nono:

B_Loco 04-22-04 03:47 PM

^^^ a real lyricist can spit sober drunk or high...it dosent make u less the emcee if u spit while under the influence....dats like sayin "Oh i cant fuck when im sober,i gotta be drunk"?? make no damn sense boi.

:Krysis: 04-23-04 04:48 AM

^^^thnx....n thnx 4 the replies yall, much luv...

D~Illar~1 04-23-04 06:53 AM

not bad man..it was 2 simple(the rhyming scheme) 4 me
but ey...its a freestyle....your drunk
nice job
cud u check out my drop
My testimony
peace

DMM 04-23-04 12:21 PM

nice rymin sceme, good flow, nice multies, good overall....

yOuNG tIPS 04-23-04 02:14 PM

that shit was nice i was feeling the word play i like how it just flowed threw niclely....1

KKbug 04-25-04 01:52 AM

i liked it. sounds good ceep dr0pin!

Willa 04-25-04 03:10 AM

good drop
and yo i can spit high but drunk hell no when i get drunk i cant c straight so i wouldnt e able 2 write it lol
i think he just drank a lil bit

:Krysis: 04-25-04 05:58 AM

^^^^
i can handle my drink.....silly girl.....me = old enuff too drink = i handle mine....
u=yung=silly=cant handle a stabalised bicycle let alone drink....but thanks for the replies...


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