Battle: Ill Teacher Vs Demobx
 

I'M READY TO THIS U DROP FIRST :gfy:

Yo listen up. Cause im the teacher and you’re the student
Imma drop a history lesson on ya cause this isnt even an event
Here comes the lesson
Shutup and don’t be messin
Cause ill snipe ya like a JFK assassination
My flow is like an arithmatic equation
You ain't gonna figure it out
You shouldn't fail this battle you should just drop out
Cuz ill Drop bombs on you like its Hiroshima
Ill smoke ya until I get pulmonary emphysema
I’m about to start world war three
Though my rhymes will be everlasting yours are already history
Im like Wilt Chamberlain’s one hundred point game
I got the crowd goin fuckin insane
this isn’t a battle it’s just then 7th game
That im controlling with my flow
If you don’t know what I was talking bout a second ago
Then head back to history class
Cause the teacher just fuckin flunked yo’ ass

you gonna drop yet???

whats good
 

Make a nigga like u pay up all 7 days like nyc meters
summon ya to my street court and introduce you to the heater/
like derek jeter your number 2 get accostumed to flipping your double u's to an M cause i'm murderen' merkin in broad day light thats for certain /
theres no creeping this nigga thinks hes teaching i just taught him a lesson and now hes bleeding -
fluids better teach ya students if u fuck with me gonna end up losing -ligaments pack a survival bag in yo lower back from the disfigurement
I heard some whispering
that u still building blocks playing with toys for tots still stuck on the bottom like grime on pots
got ya seeing spots thinking of what to say on your burial plot

even the cops turning they back cause theres no saving yo' ass light a candle up for u at mass
and hope ure dayz pass without having to relapse -evertime you think of this lyrical assasination
im stirring up more than the nation with this killing worldwide satellite transmission will here me ripping you crumbling you like a cookie
you rookie killing you like u owe a debt to a bookie
im fully capable of increaing the humps on yo back like a camel
pressure starts increasing got u leaning towards ure ankles
im official ure nothing but a sample of a nigga thats still learning how buckle up his saddle and ride or die he chose to make my hands multipy now i hit em like and octopus fell from the sky. :thefinger

Okay....

Ill Teacher.....u need to elevate in everything....u were just talking about what u were going to do.....never had any direct hard hitting punches....no personals....flow was fucked up because of stretched lines....no multis....go to tutorials n read up on punches and flow....cuz u need to get down those 2 basics before trying anything else....all i can say is elevate....

Verse Score...2/10

demobx....okay yours wasnt that great either.....u had multis all over the place....but they really didnt have ne impact cept for a couple of them....punches were indirect and elementary....flow was ok.....sum ur shit didnt rhyme.....jus elevate.....u got this jus for havin a better concept of how to battle....u threw a lil bit of punches while Ill threw none....

Verse Score....4/10

Vote - demobx

return the favor on my topical..........
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119613

aiight this wasnt that good of a battle and ill teacher u didnt come hard at all ya verse was mostly filler wasnt really feelin it....u had a couple good punches but u need a lil work and your structure is off......as for demo u had a nice verse a couple good punches/personals...u had a couple good multis and at some areas you didnt rhyme but overall u did nicer than ill teacher.....

vote : demobx

demobx get this vote because he just came harder, both had an alright flow to it.. but DMOB threw better punches, nothing else was that great ya both need work but DMOB came harder, flow.. work on your punches a bit man you get better..

vote - DMB

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119893

Uppin for votes

Demo killed this kid Ill wat were u doin horrid structure and flow

Demo=6/10
Ill=3/10

Demobx had this shit won no doubt.. he had the flow and punches.. he also had a good structure

Ill teacher... nice name.. u stuck to it because u had nice wordplay.. but wordplay isnt nuttin when u dont arrange em to make a good punch