streetsweepa vrs. mike12ikeda
 

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no d/r
no crew votes

streetsweepa = $$$tim$$$. Both DQ'ed and banned for cheating
-Cprogress

I could tell ya weak even if your stats-weren’t-shown
“Alcatraz” you on FRONT LINES like you was Al Capone//1

My Verses are like scriptures from the holy bible
You must be work for the WWE cause you hold-a-fake-title//2

I must be Caron Butler cause you will never stop-this-heat
Call me garbage man; I’m the one that’s “sweeping” this trash off-the-“streets”//3

Your overconfident mind-state is one thing that mike-hates//
I’ll leave you shook like Detroit’s crime-rate//4

You’ll collapse worse than its auto in-dust-ry
Though-in-the-streets I thought you was tough enough to beat me dude
You need a turban on your head cause you will never “Sikh” the truth//5

Be ready your weak punches will be intercepted and reflected//
your flow has been inspected,its queer so now it wil be rejected//
you shouldnt fuck with me im respected,all my punches connected//
you punches are weak theyre not felt,theyre undetected//
bitch bow down im the leader, ive been elected//
your gonna get wrecked,my styles so sick it grotsk//
you have no chance u better disperse, its only gonna get worse//
u lost i beat u wit tha first verse,are u weak or just under a curse?//
quit rappin it aint right for u u shouldbe a nurse,
ur ryhmes are so gay they should come wit a purse,//
ur the fuckin fake,your not nas more like j-timberlake//
the battle is mine to take,ur not a gangster just in jail for gay rape//

alright alright...... Mike...got this..

simply mike got his wordplay on point definitely on point.....his punchlines and his structures are definitely good tooo..
streetsweepa you are good but what gave mike the edge is the fact you write the same types of liens regardless it's pointeless after awhile...but mikes has some variation to it all...

i give my vote to mike.

Hook a brotha up wit some votes heres the link (ill return the favor)

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117057

dickriders what the hell is that?? thats bullshit

hey good battle
i give it to street
overall:8/10
bestline:ur the fuckin fake,your not nas more like j-timberlake//
the battle is mine to take,ur not a gangster just in jail for gay rape//
breakdown for mike: 7/10
bad structure nothin worth quoting
my vote streetsweepa

i was really feelin mikes verse crazy ill especially this line

"I must be Caron Butler cause you will never stop-this-heat
Call me garbage man; I’m the one that’s “sweeping” this trash off-the-“streets”//3"

^^ nice bar man feelin it nice punches wordplay and flow really nice

as for streetsweepa man crazy multis sick verse but although u had all those multis there was hardly any punches and the multis were pretty much just filler..but other than that u had a nice verse

really really close battle

but my vote goes to.........................mike

~1~

i dont know it was all good hard to pick but mikes verse was a little short ...

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