Rednecks
 

im the illest mc ya eva heard
flip tha script ad reverse every word
my lyrical schemes fly like a bird
i pimp tha game and make it mine
with words like this i dont need ice to shine
im 16 and write my own rhymes
live in nc and im doin fine
i flip the bird :thefinger and i aint clappin
talkin smack ill get to crackin
in your face
some say im immature cause ill put u into place
im tired of all u racist faces talkin crap
even though im white i aint down with that
ill spray you with tha ak :shoot:
wake up into a day
of eternal night
went out without a fight
how bright
was it to mess with me
to push or test me
im the best G
dont need weapons ill use my fists
watch out next time i get pissed :gfy:

good flow and thats about it work on structure and vocab