killah bwoy vs franchize
 

aiight lets go

10 lines
blind spit
no d/r,cv or biting
good luck
no feedin if someone finishes first
good luck

aight playa this me checkin in
good luck homey!!

checkin in
good luck.................................

check it killa this is my spit

I’m a Lyrical Leader makin me the king of killah’s destruction//
His spit’s gonna be ready-made like a rehearsed production//
Ure crew is full of hoes, I put all u bitches to work//
If ure crew was the ‘Enterprise’ I’d be fuckin ‘Captain Kirk’//
I cud be considered OutKast cuz my shit is ‘So Fresh & So Clean’// (OutKast song)
Ure shit is ripped and dirty I polish it with my Mr. Sheen//
U shud quit right now cuz my shit u’ll never surpass//
U aint got no skillz, I cud beat u rappin out my ass//
This bwoy don’t know rap, I gave him Eminem tickets for free but//
He said Eminem…which one, chocolate or peanut??//

PEACE!!
no feedin off my verse remember playa!!

You callin' the police?...........Lines will beat you down like Rodney King......./
Don't watch TV.........Rhymes'll pop through ya Television like-the-ring......../
Lines can't harm me....My Verse affects this kid like the Luthar king speech.../
I spit holy.......'Cause if I got somethin' to say I let my nine preach....../
You like busta rhymes?.....I'll "break ya neck" leave your head hangin....../
Bust-my-nine....You tryna fuck a gurl? my guns gonna be whats "bangin"...../
You can't write.......Break ya pencil rip your page shut your book...../
you tryin' yo bite?....Rip out ya eyeballs drop my verse then tell you too look.../
Ya rhymes is gay.....take the win beat ya ass throw you back in the closet.../
you gonna pay......Kill you slowly snatch ya wallet and take ya bank deposit...../



and its ova

tight battle homey
now lets get uppin sum votes

i cant vote cuz im crewm but im gonan say franchize won he had better punches straight up good batle for both of yall

franchize u did good but u need to improve on ur Multis but u had good one

Killah u did nice but u need more punches and multis but to tell you had way better punches then franchize no offense a close battle but u took it boy

Franchize

Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
metas 7/10

26/40

Killah Bwoy

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 8/10
Structure 7/10
Metas 8/10

31/40


Good work guyz

yo i seen better from both of ya'll wasn't really feelin either verses that much
franchise u had punches but none of the was cool at all
and killah, im givin this to u even though i dont like street talk in battles at least u didn't try givin yourself props by callin yourself captain kerk.

killah u actual brought up a couple of cool topics wich is jus... um cooler
Don't watch TV.........Rhymes'll pop through ya Television like-the-ring......../
Lines can't harm me....My Verse affects this kid like the Luthar king speech.../
no extra props on the style this time, cuz it wasn't as good as the last one u did like this. still decent
vote- killah,

oh and for alll yall who didnt understand the gay and closet line............if ur gay they usually tell u to STAY IN THE CLOSET..cuz gay guys stay in the closet cuz they emberaased

Franchize work on vocab multis and creativity i didnt really like any of ur vesr it was mad played

Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
metas 7/10

26/40

Killah Bwoy nice punches u came more creative i likes the closet line ur punches hit harder than franchizes u could work on vocab and multis

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 8/10
Structure 7/10
Metas 8/10

31/40

Damn yo franchize elevate all i gotta sayt oy ou

Killa bwoy whooodie whooo nice verse playa punches in every line make battles bomb ass pussy

vote killa bwoy return da favore

Killah-i thought the punches and structure was hott....noo doubt...better vocab..i liked how u used history to try 2 murder the kat..with the whole MLK speech thing...niice...u couldnt have done worse...thats real good

Fran-i guess ur new? dont know..but ur punches was a lil kiddy...up ur vocab, make ur punches a lil more funny as to soo serious...ppl can use a good laugh...multies didnt see any...besides that ur not bad...

vote-Killah,better punches...if it comes to a tie i always look at punches...i think punches kill it....

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