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hydroponic_buzz vs jay_dogg
10 - 15 lines
no d/r i'll spit first, give you a chance dj, spin that shit... |
Lets go then beeach...
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jay_dogg? anotha' wanna be emcee, to flee the streets of the D/
get down on you're knees, ...quick, you're new names iced tea, ...bitch/ you're a golf tee g an' the world's the ball, weighin' on you're back makin you fall/ oh, i have the perfect gift for you, honest it's ace, it'l go down nice with you're face/ a paper bag to hide you're face, we need to erase every trace of this ugly discrace/ an' you dont have to mind losin' you're mind, cos you need one to start/ that's why you're words are intertwined, you need at least a part, to chart this fine art/ this rap gqme is mine, i dine sippin' wine from a divine shrine assigned.../ ...assigned to me, the meanest MC, can you see that i glow with glee/ you're just another homo fag, a pus-sucking slag, who is tagged/ you're tagged so you momma can keep tabs on you/ you'd get dragged if you left you're crib, you'd be beaten black an' blue/ |
ok mr buzz lightyear likes the dick in the ear ill show you fear/
you fuckin queer you mama caught you fuckin that deer/ she told me last time i fucked her for free/ maby a dictionary wouldnt go a miss before you try and diss/ this is the dogpound you better watch when i come around/ when you hear the sound of ma AK, bullets comin straight your way/ you call that a fine art, ive seen more style in a fart more class in a shoppin cart/ so if its hydroponic buzz better not call the fuzz this bitch is harmless/ and his beats are charmless, watch as this bitch trys to rap/ don't fall for his trap this guy just cant rap all his shit is beyonde crap/ ok this shit is done ive had my fun, reloaded my gun bitch you better start to run/ |
uppin for some votes come on people
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yo can we have some honest votes on this please
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aiight this was an ass battle hydroponic forrealz fam u is nice but what the fuck was that!! a fucking mother goose nursery rhyme and jay dogg.....dam fam i aint never seen u battle but i really hope your better than that....you both had tons of multies......but half the shyt didnt make sense.....both your structures is off.......flow is off.......and i seen 1 good punch the whole battle and that was from buzz so just becuz that 1 punch my vote goes to buzz elevate
vote: buzz |
uppin for more votes to get it finished come on ppl
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gotta be feelin da same as Flow Intellegent. that wuz some nersery type shit.
jay dogg remember what i said about the set up line. but HB totally took this one vote Hydroponic Buzz |
uppin for votes
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flow intell did dun say it all, this battle was poor, poor everything as it goes...
the 1 punchline is what took it for me also.... vote = buzz u both need to elevate a whole lot... |
can we get another couple of votes to close this thread...
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Yo Drop A Vote On This Dogg
Then I'll Vote On This Battle |
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jay_dogg? anotha' wanna be emcee, to flee the streets of the D/
get down on you're knees, ...quick, you're new names iced tea, ...bitch/ you're a golf tee g an' the world's the ball, weighin' on you're back makin you fall/ oh, i have the perfect gift for you, honest it's ace, it'l go down nice with you're face/ a paper bag to hide you're face, we need to erase every trace of this ugly discrace/ an' you dont have to mind losin' you're mind, cos you need one to start/ that's why you're words are intertwined, you need at least a part, to chart this fine art/ this rap gqme is mine, i dine sippin' wine from a divine shrine assigned.../ ...assigned to me, the meanest MC, can you see that i glow with glee/ you're just another homo fag, a pus-sucking slag, who is tagged/ you're tagged so you momma can keep tabs on you/ you'd get dragged if you left you're crib, you'd be beaten black an' blue/ decent verse some lines to far stretched but had some good wordplay an decent vocab an punchs and personals lol good drop just continue to elvate and jay dogg your lines was hti an miss badly miss when the ydid lines was overstretched GET RID OF THE FILLER SHIT that would help you a lot stay consitetn wit hard punchs |
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