SPuL v.s Tenken
 

aight check it...

yo ima "split" ur eyes so you can "four-see" my victory~//
call you "Miss Cleo" coz u "predict" ur own loss, fuck the irony~//

this "nigga" actin like M.jackson, "askin for anyone unda 16"~//
whoops! called u a "nigga" my bad "wigga", sorry bout that "Doug Christie"~//

This kids like a "bean" without the "stalk"~//
ur mom was on my "Jack & Golden eggs" befor you could walk~//

WTF is a SPul anyway, it's not in da Dictionary~//
i got u more "dumbfounded" than the bitch "Drew Carey"~//

speakin of which, ur dictionary is as "thick" as Ally McBeal~//
u got more chance of beating me than "M.J's" "court appeal"~//

Whoa! now that i got this audiences attention~//
i'd like to announce "Miss Cleos" intervention~//

the "excitements" over, its time for the "young Crackafella"~//
to spit lyrics that dont got more "chemistry" than Vinegar and Baking Soda~//

^^ yo u bitchy ass nigga complaing i SPAT and u still bitching fuckA... HOLLA BACK

man dont be cloggin up the thread if ya not gon vote...man juss chill both our verses are posted in MY thread so dont worry about it let the votes come in.........
anyways

UPPIN 4 VOTEs

dis was a great battle i liked both shits

tenken u had some hott shit i liked your flow and u dropped bombs on punches and added personals

bestline-this "nigga" actin like M.jackson, "askin for anyone unda 16"~//
whoops! called u a "nigga" my bad "wigga", sorry bout that "Doug Christie"~//

i like dat cuz he like da kingz

worsteline-none i liked yo whole verse

spul

another 1 dat was hott homie liked yo flow punches and personals

bestline-My verses are so hot… they be tighter than Michael Jackon’s ass
After he shoves all the dicks in it… from the 1st grade class

nice start

worsteline- none here nice drop

tenken

open-8/10
punches-9/10
persoanlas-9/10
consistant verse-9/10
flow-9/10
structure-9/10
close-9/10
overall-9.1/10

spul

open-9/10
punches-9/10
persoanlas-9/10
consistant verse-10/10
flow-9/10
structure-9/10
close-9/10
overall-9.4/10

oh shit my badd winner goes 2 spul ......................

uppin 4 votes.

uppin 4 votes

i dissagree with the chopper. I think this battle was one sided.

Tenken has a hella crackin verse. I like the Doug Christy line and M.J. lines
Vocab:7/10
Flow:8/10
open:8/10
punches:9/10
persoanlas:9/10
consistant verse:9/10
structure:9/10
close:9/10
overall:9.7/10

SPUL your verse sounded pritty elementry my dear watson. I don't like your choseing of words(wack/e-lax,Foshos/knows/dough?????????) You could have done better. You to should have a rematch of this after your done, so you guys can put up better verses
Vocab:5/10
Flow:7/10
open:8/10
punches:7/10
persoanlas:7/10
consistant verse:9/10
structure:9/10
close:7/10
overall:7/10

"Young craka~fella" lol
Than is how the cookie crumbles

ok check it

tenken opener was startin off sick and then you used a miss cleo punch an killed it good wordplay though try a different line behind that four see shit and the closer wasnt there either had good wordplay again just no punch in it and threw the rest of the verse was real inconsitent to me you used another miss cleo punch lol but you did have good wordplay just try workin on makin your punchs hit harder and more personals

spul opener wasnt nothin stop with tha michael jackson punchs already use kobe bryant or somethin and the closer was decent coulda been better and threw the rest of the verse stayed some what conisistent decent punchs threw the verse again no punchs in your verse hit that hard but stayed bringin some kind of a punch so that gets my vote in this battle

vote spul

uppin 4 votes

look i got o give this to ten

TEN: you was good....i liked it..good opener..."four see" i love it.....but work on your structure dont like the way you put it in bars..buthat coo..just work on your meta4s and personals..evryone loves good personals..all in all7/10

spul: you was ok you had alot of lines..they kinsa bored me..but your good..i see you become someone good on this site....all in all 6/10

next time battle in elevated..

vote=TEN

My verses are so hot… they be tighter than Michael Jackon’s ass
After he shoves all the dicks in it… from the 1st grade class
^^^^ WEAK PUNCH….BUT FUNNY…7
Man, I should have passed. Your rhymes are all wack
You be deliverin’ more shit, than a lil’ kid on e-lax
^^^^^^^^
It’s time for you to relax… and slo yourself down
But you’ve already stopped, cuz my verse buried you in the ground
^^^^^BASIC ,,, 6
You suck, so people frown… as you do yo pimp walkin’
I don’t need to say nothin’, cuz yo verse jus did the talkin’
^^^^^^^WEAK……..6
You then get to doin’ stalkin’. And then you get to the bitin’
Jus like Mike Tyson to Hollyfield, but that ain’t considered fightin’
^^^^^^^^WORK ON YO LINES…..6
You will never be like lightin’, but you will disappear in a flash
You’re more like sound… cuz you’re gonna finish last
^^^^^^^^YOU LOST ME…….6
I will Kick yO ass fashos… and everybody knos
I will roll yo ass up… jus like my fuckin’ dough
^^^^^WEAK WORDPLAY…..6
If you’re wonderin’ where the personals are… don’t you wurry
Jus kno that you’re getting yo first loss… all in a hurry
^^^^^^WTF……………5

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