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MM Vs MARVOLoUsJ1009
MM vs this guy
you know the rules. Drop your verse nucca. |
jea..
u pussy dunny i'll show up 2 ya block with beretta's & mags // i could see u "nuts" so when i clap ima leave "m(&)m" in a "bag" //[get it] i dont even gota ball-2-fist...but i heard about u dogg-u-bitch // if everybody caught a "cold" & "dialed ya number" they wouldn't "call-u-sick" // y rap when u aint even shippin-gold,trust me i aint gon reach 4 my hip n fold // go head talk shit dunny keep commin "out ya face" like "pipen's nose" // ima come 2 ya crib and put "metal on ya'll pussy's" like "stripper poles" // ya girl told me u aint gota "sex-drive" so u just put ya "dick in ya hand" and hit da "road" // u say ya lines is dope?..nope u neva stood on da block grindin coke // i know where u live dogg u like "Weed" u not hard da find and "smoke" // 10 lines.....spit back dunny |
Marv why are you battling me , bitch I will hold ya exsistance
& if you steel my style , I`ll knock more times than jehova witness I told ya you’re the shittest , words of wisdom will keep you on hold. Then Erase your name on RB , like im cprogress or strobe Battling me ?…. nah…. stop fronting it`s gay... How can you battle me…when your to busy running away You suck more than a vacuum , & I`ll run the highest lesson bitch He doesn’t rap , no he`s to busy sending 21 private messages. (21 questions) Look at this kid upping his posts I wont boar..but dude its over.. … you aint no dangerous weapon , dawg your more like a supersoaker! |
can yall vote on this battle
quickpunch vs gkillaz05...we'll come back and vote on this after uve both voted on our shit...thanks..pce |
dog y u cant just vote n now............................
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Punches: MARV....killed em wit this=y rap when u aint even shippin-gold,trust me i aint gon reach 4 my hip n fold //
go head talk shit dunny keep commin "out ya face" like "pipen's nose" // ima come 2 ya crib and put "metal on ya'll pussy's" like "stripper poles" //"... lol thats all he needed for this one Vocab: None..both spittaz need to work on that Multis: MARV...he had multis that were good,while the utha guy had none Personals-none Structure: Both emcees had good readable structure Flow: *note there is flow in text as long as u know how to read and rhyme...and i feel both yall had good flow v/MARV nice shyt yo |
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punchs-j easily stayed consistant with them 2 that opener was tight and so was this go head talk shit dunny keep commin "out ya face" like "pipen's nose" // ima come 2 ya crib and put "metal on ya'll pussy's" like "stripper poles" // personals- marv got it easily with that opener shit had me crackin up multies marv got this to didnt see multies in mm flow both could use more multies good battle vote marvolous |
im up 2-0.........any more votes...drop ya links i'll return da favor
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DIS ITS A GOOD BATTLE// BUT MARV KILLED MM WITH PUNCHLINES// NICE FLOWZ AND NICE STRUTURE//
MM=NO VOCAB NOT GOOD PUNCHLINES YO NIGGA HIT HARDER V=MARV AND YO NIGGA GIVE A VOTE ON MY HOMIE LOSTCHILD// U GOTS TO END DIS DOG IF U DO MADDDDDDDDD FAVAS FO YO ASS NIGGGA http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120329 |
Here's the way I saw it........
Marvey came pretty hard in this. He fell off from the punches in a few spots but he recovered before the end. Not his best work but it was very good. Murder came a lot harder than some of you are givin him credit for. I liked the way you changed the way everyone uses the jehovahs witness line and usin Cprog and Strobe was pretty hot. But you fell off in the middle and never really recovered............. so that's why I gotta go wit Marvey on this one......... Vote - MarvolousJ1009 |
Ok, its like this. Marv, you started hot, but then fell off. If you had kept it consistent, you would have won, but you didn't. The first bars had it all, personals, nice wordplay, original punches, and decent enough flow. Then you started stretching lines, your punches fell off, your originality went away... not solid.
Murderous: you didn't have any single punch that was quite as good as the m&m one, but you came solid throughout the verse. The supersoaker line is started to be played, but still not bad for a closer. I only wish you had more personals... but still you had nice flow, good punches and kept it pretty original throughout. v/Murderous Hit back my battle against J_Rip (sig) |
Marvelous definitly took this by "storm" like Ben Frankin wit "kitez"
Marvelous came nice all the way through. vote marvelous |
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