Vc vs. GKillaz05
 

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15-25 lines.
Post by friday
no feeding
need at least 75 posts to vote.
NOOO D/R votes
i post first.......ill get at it alter tonight or tomorrow
no recycling
oh yea one more thing....FORCED WORD MATCH must use:
segregated,manipulated, rapbattle community ,immunity

i dont even kno what segregrated means.... lmao

lol...go read the dictioanry dog. it like seperating according to race like segregated school were the whites school not interfering with black schools... and IM BLACK!!!...so i know all about it

VOTE ON THIS BATTLE YALL I PROMISE TO RETURN THE FAVOR heres the link

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=120193&page=2

You dont want this i'll get u ripped into pieces,be in multiple bodybags/
your govt name displayed gladly,but it aint for a win.it'll be for a bodytag/
that 45 i carry get G *kill*ed az tricked,get this nigga clapped quick/
my guns like my dick it never locks up when it make the gat~click/
i'll do u in with measures like the Mafia my measurement are drastic/
we stay sick.and i school u like *ill teachers* cuz this domain is CLass Sic/
I.C.U.due in the intensive care cuz my shrapnel will get you in critical condition/
like i got the cure for ya sick lyrics i got you in terminal remission/
the way u sell out,u should be way above on the list for commissions/
like car salemen who spew feces everythign you say is full of shit/
guess you like the taste the semen cuz ya mouth stay full of dick/
i'll roast ya ass twice times over like twin hens in a rotissiere grill/
brand ya *nice*clothes *priceless* may as well call you the good will/
i'm so sick,i give you that AIDS.,from my lyrics you get granted zero [bold]IMMUNITY[/bold]/
get a real life... 13-1 ya luck ends here,C S rules the [bold]RB COMMUNITY[/bold]/
i get you injected with *waves* of advanced rhymes that make gkillaz C SIC/
its *potent* i do *quotients* get you divided like i was reenactin the [bold]SEGREGATED[/bold]/
my *Enygma* is to get you lyrically confused ,purely, [bold]MANIPULATED[/bold]/
i'll get *fidel*,and have killa *mutilated* and get this nigga *castrated*/
ya girl pussy taught me the true meaning for the real dirty south/
the only time we'll ever come *head to head* is my dick in ya mouth/
FUCK IT IM DONE WIHT THIS NIGGA HE'S NOT TOUCHIN ME,IM NOT ELTON JOHN/
YA STATUS AS A HOT EMCEE IS NOW RELINGUISHED A.K.A. THE SHIT IS GONE!/

You dont want this i'll get u ripped into pieces,be in multiple bodybags/
your govt name displayed gladly,but it aint for a win.it'll be for a bodytag/
that 45 i carry get G *kill*ed az tricked,get this nigga clapped quick/
my guns like my dick it never locks up when it make the gat~click/
i'll do u in with measures like the Mafia my measurement are drastic/
we stay sick.and i school u like *ill teachers* cuz this domain is CLass Sic/
I.C.U.due in the intensive care cuz my shrapnel will get you in critical condition/
like i got the cure for ya sick lyrics i got you in terminal remission/
the way u sell out,u should be way above on the list for commissions/
like car salemen who spew feces everythign you say is full of shit/
guess you like the taste the semen cuz ya mouth stay full of dick/
i'll roast ya ass twice times over like twin hens in a rotissiere grill/
brand ya *nice*clothes *priceless* may as well call you the good will/
i'm so sick,i give you that AIDS.,from my lyrics you get granted zero IMMUNITY/
get a real life... 13-1 ya luck ends here,C S rules the RB COMMUNITY/
i get you injected with *waves* of advanced rhymes that make gkillaz C SIC/
its *potent* i do *quotients* get you divided like i was reenactin the SEGREGATED/
my *Enygma* is to get you lyrically confused ,purely, MANIPULATED/
i'll get *fidel*,and have killa *mutilated* and get this nigga *castrated*/
ya girl pussy taught me the true meaning for the real dirty south/
the only time we'll ever come *head to head* is my dick in ya mouth/
FUCK IT IM DONE WIHT THIS NIGGA HE'S NOT TOUCHIN ME,IM NOT ELTON JOHN/
YA STATUS AS A HOT EMCEE IS NOW RELINGUISHED A.K.A. THE SHIT IS GONE!/



I DID NOT KNOW HOW TO BOLD THE WORDS AT FIRST BUT THIS IS THE SAME BATTLE JUST MADE SURE THE WORDS WERE BOLDED

Oh Yea And I Forgot I Used Alot Of Other Emcees Names In The Diss If You Look At It Carefull.. But I Meant No Beef Towards Any One Jsut Wanted To Use Peoples Namess.

iight man, sorry it took so long had no way to get on the comp until now, so I will spit something right now

This is a game like survivor but is held in the RB Community...
I am the driver of this game you aint gun win the Immunity...
This battle is easily mine man you dont got a chance in hell...
That shit was the funniest you need to learn how to spell...
Your in the pre-writtin group this site should be SEGREGATED...
Ima win thats stipulated your rytmes and flow are MANIPULATED...
How you gun put me in bodybags when your already in one...
You tried to shoot me but you had no aim with your water gun...
I am about to finish you off your off gun leave you in shock...
You dick Ride so much thats why you name is Vagina and Cock... (VC)
Five more lines and then I get the win it already in my favour...
I already know that cuz you coudlnt win if God was you saver...
What condom is your favorite flavor the d/r are gun need to know...
Altough your not going to get one vote becuase you dont flow you blow..
Gun shoot your from head to toe, my KO list your gun get burried below...

You dont want this i'll get u ripped into pieces,be in multiple bodybags/
your govt name displayed gladly,but it aint for a win.it'll be for a bodytag/
i'll roast ya ass twice times over like twin hens in a rotissiere grill/
brand ya *nice*clothes *priceless* may as well call you the good will/
i'm so sick,i give you that AIDS.,from my lyrics you get granted zero IMMUNITY/
get a real life... 13-1 ya luck ends here,C S rules the RB COMMUNITY/
i'll get *fidel*,and have killa *mutilated* and get this nigga *castrated*/
VC your flow and vocab is sick, but some stuff didnt make sense. above are your best punches, and you came hard with them. nice personals but you need more metaphors, but wordplay is there. not much imagery though...but very very tight verse.

man this a tough battle cause gkillaz first half was bitten and didnt make sense but his second half was tight
How you gun put me in bodybags when your already in one...
You tried to shoot me but you had no aim with your water gun...
I am about to finish you off your off gun leave you in shock...
You dick Ride so much thats why you name is Vagina and Cock... (VC)
Altough your not going to get one vote becuase you dont flow you blow..
Gun shoot your from head to toe, my KO list your gun get burried below...
nice disses wit personals and structure...and imagery is nice...but you didnt have the vocab, wordplay of vc....and overall his stuff was better so i give it to him....nice battle though

vc very long verse. close battle. you bring nice vocabulary, with a tacky lookin structure. work on it. flow wasnt steady due to the fact that when you here one rhyme it takes a while to get to the other. its not easily read. i have to find out where i left off at. a few punches here and there but none was a knock out. you lack personal issues against your opponent. you originality i tell you that. good for being creative. Still need to elevate

gkillaz close battle, did you put effort to this. this is just an average verse. Nice personal punch attack, the one about dick riding vagina and cock line. maybe the best punchline of this battle. you lacked vocabulary. and i know you can do better then this. nice structure and the flow was there. Feeding is basically your whole verse. did you read the rules. this should be a rematch.

v/vc

YO VC GOT DIS// YO BOMB ASS PUNCHLINES BOMB FLOWZ// DA ONE I LIKED like i got the cure for ya sick lyrics i got you in terminal remission/
the way u sell out,u should be way above on the list for commissions/
like car salemen who spew feces everythign you say is full of shit/
guess you like the taste the semen cuz ya mouth stay full of dick/
i'll roast ya ass twice times over like twin hens in a rotissiere grill/
brand ya *nice*clothes *priceless* may as well call you the good will/
i'm so sick,i give you that AIDS.,from my lyrics you get granted zero IMMUNITY NOW DAT WAS HOT!


YO KILLA// U HAD SOME GOOD FLOWZ BUT U DIDNT HIT HARD PUCHES

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uppinnnnnnnnn for two more votes please!!!!!!!!!!!

hol this nigga was battlin both of yall and musdered both of you his the nigga of site killin both of yall
You dont want this i'll get u ripped into pieces,be in multiple bodybags/
your govt name displayed gladly,but it aint for a win.it'll be for a bodytag/

i'm so sick,i give you that AIDS.,from my lyrics you get granted zero IMMUNITY/
get a real life... 13-1 ya luck ends here,C S rules the RB COMMUNITY/
i get you injected with *waves* of advanced rhymes that make gkillaz C SIC/
its *potent* i do *quotients* get you divided like i was reenactin the SEGREGATED/
my *Enygma* is to get you lyrically confused ,purely, MANIPULATED/
like car salemen who spew feces everythign you say is full of shit/
guess you like the taste the semen cuz ya mouth stay full of dick/

Shame Shame Shame G-Killaz!!!!! .... lol Nice Drop Though!! Just Didn't Come Wit Enough Force


5/10
You dont want this i'll get u ripped into pieces,be in multiple bodybags/
your govt name displayed gladly,but it aint for a win.it'll be for a bodytag/

7/10
that 45 i carry get G *kill*ed az tricked,get this nigga clapped quick/
my guns like my dick it never locks up when it make the gat~click/

9/10
i'll do u in with measures like the Mafia my measurement are drastic/
we stay sick.and i school u like *ill teachers* cuz this domain is CLass Sic/

9/10
I.C.U.due in the intensive care cuz my shrapnel will get you in critical condition/
like i got the cure for ya sick lyrics i got you in terminal remission/
the way u sell out,u should be way above on the list for commissions/

^Shit Is Heated' ...!!!!!!

Takes The Win' Fairly E'z ........