A Shot in tha Hood
 

:shoot: Pop, Pop nigga another shot in tha hood//if it aint towards my house then my families all good//not carin wat happens so i live my life like i got nuthin to lose//seen some cold shit in the hood so my heart got a bruise//
u may not like me shit i dont care//get me a strap this niggas startin to stare/
who feels how i feel nigga let me know// West Unit in tha hood and we smugglin blow//oh//this is it its the big one here//cant u tell in my cold heart i got nuthin to fear//im new to this site but i aint new to the game//pickin bitches off the bench like u were doin the same//dont let me catch u backstabbin a nigga//we get it poppin in the hood while we lettin off triggas//
so before u come to my nigga let me know//cause u get popped if u dont know AMO// :shoot:
R.I.P. to all my niggaz pour out a little liquor for yall
holla bak

im feeling that shit cuz you keeping it real that straps goin off it just aint worth it i just lost one of my niggas that i met threw one of my tight ass niggas and i knew the dude for like 3 months and now his 5 years old son and his 2 years old daught gotta grow up fatherless....RIP VON.....Boston Philly n NY lik shots in the hood....1

i like it, and i don't like much on this site!

that was whack below average not ok
this is my mood right now too so blah
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u got a couple of things to fix on that
1) u need to write it in bars
2) u need to read it over to make sure it makes sense cause your line "so before u come nigga let me know" didnt make any sense when your talkin about the hood cause u gotta be ready at all times when somethin go down
3)stay on one topic first u tlkin bout niggas shootin then u talkin bout u shootin which doesnt go along wit the topic
i aint really like this 1, i've read better work from u homie whats going on