My Flow
 

when i flow i leave da mike on smoke, i
make my foes bite my dust til they choke,
no joke you don't wanna be up in my grill, i
hit em widda raw shit, i'll make a nigga feel ill,
Too many wanna come test dis, they're
gonna fuck around and need a bulletproof vest, nah
Jokes,allow da gat still don't test but still don't test,
Unless you want a fly kick to da chest, get
left on da floor, breathin impaire, but
it's your fault cos ya just wanna screw n stare
didn't wanna listen to my warnin ya didn't wanna
Care,now machines are helpin you breathe air,
when i flow i turn into a fiend, but
Dat's me,dat's da way it is, dats how it be
S2K we da number one team, come
top of our game and we reign supreme,
WOT? ya wanna be doubtin dat i'm hot, i'll
Beat a boy cut im up and leave im to rot,
make a boy go into shock like he got shot,
leave im shakin like a stoner without pot... :thumbup:

Well darkman, i like your ryme skeem. that shit sounds funny and entertaining to keep on reading. On the other side, the only thing i disapproved was the way you use badwords to make your ryme sound more bolder. The skill you have just by writing correct words is better.You sound like you wana beat somebody up with your crew or some shit, but other than that, the drop was dope.

yea im feeling exactly what snake eyes says but i know that if you keep on posting youll drop some fire...most defently....but ill tell you one thing i do lik ehow your flow is like your just a wild cat ......1

tight