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franchiZe vs. spiky2k8
yo check it spiky agreed to a battle after i pm'ed him but he aint gonna spit till 5pm
check it these are the rules!! 10-15 lines max!! 20 mins to spit after u check in!! u get a day to check in or its a no show DQ!! no d/r no hate no crew ***AND NO FEEDIN OFF VERSES!*** As agreed i'll spit first!! |
and check it i'm gonna check in right after he does
he agreed to 5pm so i'm givin him till 6pm cuz really a day is just too long for me to wait |
Some ones gonna get killid in this battl4e n his name doesint start witta f
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look yo we dont need dickriders on this site....someone please get him out of here
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fuck the waitin i'm checkin in now and i'm gonna spit the same time
instead of puttin my spit in this post like i was just about to do tho i'll make it separate |
my spit shud only take about 10 minutes
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yo check it here is tha franchiZe ready 2 spit
I’m a fuckin mage, full 2 the brim with rage, u cudn’t hit me wit a fuckin 12 gauge// Step into the rap cage, and spit a page, but ure ass cant rap it belongs backstage// And crikey, what kinda name is spiky, man I’ll fuckin cripple ure psyche// I push nikeys, this is b.ball u wanna be like mikey, u beat me…not likely// And 2k8 man its 2k4, my rhymes are hardcore, leave u bloody on the floor// But I luv gore, so I’ll make u bleed some more, ure raps put the whole crowd to sleep…my god was that a snore// Put u on the spot, blow ure ass off wit a gunshot, leave u at a graveyard for ure ass to fuckin rot// I got a grand plot, surround ure ass wit the rap SWAT, I’m the G-Unit but a G-UNot// I leave u paralysed, toss ure ass outside, get nails and a cross and have u crucified// I’ll let u decide, is this suicide or homicide, fuck that……it’s a fuckin rap genocide// I can see ure fear, it shows every time I appear, cuz u know ure death is about to draw near// I take military gear, shove a grenade up ure rear, have u blowin up quicker than Eminem’s rap career.// I lead the rap wave, my skillz is what u crave, u aint even worthy to be my rap slave// But I gotta say, battling me was fuckin brave, to pay u back I might not shit on ure grave// |
check in go ahead n spit
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i piss on yo grave fo sayin my raps aint raw
bitch i come and split yo wig wit a fuckn chain saw man ill spit in yo casket and blow a few holes in yo hearse ill rather go 2 jail 4 murder than snatchin a purse i want u 2 know that i was foolin around wit yo wife fuck shootin u ill stab u wit a fuckn kitchen knife u cant battle u write all yo rimes in advance i bet u sittin rite now wit yo note pad on yo pants u a pussy when u pee u sit on tha seat i took all yo punches and im still on my feet u gone lose this battle but u gone be aight but 4 rite now .... get tha fuck off this site |
my man spikey did his shit i like him hey spikey one clue st sabina and vinman holla
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whats its me vince im voted for u even though i think u lose write back
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yo homey i pre-write no shit at all
my style just blazin and u know u cant handle the heat bitch check it, up these votes and let this bitch know who the true rapper is i mean check it, he got vinman to vote even tho he think spiky lost but u know that shit aint happenin |
franchize got this easily spiky u gettin better you just still need to elevate though you got way better since iseen you last just keep postin and you get it right
franchise you had a decent verse had a lil bit of everything lines was kinda over done but the multies helped you out there overall not a bad verse vote franchise |
i piss on yo grave fo sayin my raps aint raw
bitch i come and split yo wig wit a fuckn chain saw man ill spit in yo casket and blow a few holes in yo hearse ill rather go 2 jail 4 murder than snatchin a purse i want u 2 know that i was foolin around wit yo wife fuck shootin u ill stab u wit a fuckn kitchen knife u cant battle u write all yo rimes in advance i bet u sittin rite now wit yo note pad on yo pants u a pussy when u pee u sit on tha seat i took all yo punches and im still on my feet u gone lose this battle but u gone be aight but 4 rite now .... get tha fuck off this site ^^^^^^^ GOOD BATTLE ^^^^ BUT THAT VERSE WAS WEAK!~~~~~~ ELEVATE.......... FRANCHIZE... I EXPECTED MORE~~~~~ BUT YOU STILL MERKED .... HIM` FLOW-F VOCAB-F PERSONALS-F STRUCTURE- NEITHER...BUT IT WENT TO SPIKY |
I’m a fuckin mage, full 2 the brim with rage, u cudn’t hit me wit a fuckin 12 gauge//
Step into the rap cage, and spit a page, but ure ass cant rap it belongs backstage// And crikey, what kinda name is spiky, man I’ll fuckin cripple ure psyche// I push nikeys, this is b.ball u wanna be like mikey, u beat me…not likely// And 2k8 man its 2k4, my rhymes are hardcore, leave u bloody on the floor// But I luv gore, so I’ll make u bleed some more, ure raps put the whole crowd to sleep…my god was that a snore// Put u on the spot, blow ure ass off wit a gunshot, leave u at a graveyard for ure ass to fuckin rot// I got a grand plot, surround ure ass wit the rap SWAT, I’m the G-Unit but a G-UNot// I leave u paralysed, toss ure ass outside, get nails and a cross and have u crucified// I’ll let u decide, is this suicide or homicide, fuck that……it’s a fuckin rap genocide// I can see ure fear, it shows every time I appear, cuz u know ure death is about to draw near// I take military gear, shove a grenade up ure rear, have u blowin up quicker than Eminem’s rap career.// I lead the rap wave, my skillz is what u crave, u aint even worthy to be my rap slave// But I gotta say, battling me was fuckin brave, to pay u back I might not shit on ure grave// Don't type out full bars like that, it's annoying. Also, get more personals and punches in there... work on setup lines. You elevated alot since we battled though. Props. piss on yo grave fo sayin my raps aint raw bitch i come and split yo wig wit a fuckn chain saw man ill spit in yo casket and blow a few holes in yo hearse ill rather go 2 jail 4 murder than snatchin a purse i want u 2 know that i was foolin around wit yo wife fuck shootin u ill stab u wit a fuckn kitchen knife u cant battle u write all yo rimes in advance i bet u sittin rite now wit yo note pad on yo pants u a pussy when u pee u sit on tha seat i took all yo punches and im still on my feet u gone lose this battle but u gone be aight but 4 rite now .... get tha fuck off this site terrible. you gotta elevate in everything... punches, setup, personals, creativity. v/ franchiZe. hit up my battle agaignst J_Rip in my sig. |
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