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$$UPREME VS. D~Illar~1
House Rules.....
10 Lines.....20max Check In... Before You Spit Homie'~~~~ Let's Go......... |
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$$upreme ---- |
*chin check*
spit ya shit homie..i will shortly follow |
WHAT THE FUCK R YOU THINKING....
TRYING 2 BATTLE A VET~~~~~~~~~ IF YOUR WRECKIN SHADY TYPES, I'LL GET HIS NECK BREAKING TWICE* CUZ THIS KID LOVES DICK MORE THAN DETECTIVE TRACY'S WIFE* $$UPREME, KILLS NEW' B'S 4 FUN, I'LL SUCK YOUR BARS LIKE LEACHES* SPLINTER YA' SKELETON AND LEAVE BONES THERE 2 COLLECT THE PIECES* LISTEN. D~ILLAR~1 YOUR BOUT TO GET BLAZED-OFF CHOP YOUR VERSE AND SWALLOW YOUR BARS WITH A-1 STEAK SAUCE* D~ILLAR~1 SIGNALS GETS RAPED, HE'S STUCK IN A GAY POSITION* CUZ HE GOT GUY'S "CELL NUMBERS" LIKE HE'S WORKING IN A MALE PRISON* BETTER CHECK YOUR RYHMES BEFORE POSTING A GENETICAL VISON* CUZ I'LL RIP MORE BARS IN YOUR HEAD THAN "GEOMETRICAL PRISM"* |
Mistake 1.....accepting my challenge
.....another herb wants a lesson
Your lines? Like de ja vu..Ive seen it all before so it hasnt amazed-me-yet/ Watch me erase-this-vet, bitch could be Bin Ladens Father and not raise-a-threat/ Supreme winnin?...now thats fuckin funny..n u didnt even stick ya dick-in-a-clown/ Rippin-you-now, its like your addicted to head...because your quick-to-go-down/ Beat-in-your-face-its cuz u need-a-replacement..ya verse? Ya need-to-erase-it/ Cuz its wack and u wouldnt have tight lines if you deleted-your-spaces/ Im blinded from the wackness..so your verse? Its hard-to-observe-it/ Me bite from u~ No way...cuz its like waste management..id only have garbage-to-work-with/ ~{Finish This}~ We know u aint a newbie, actin like 1's gonna give u the label Most Retarded-Vet/ Homie I see u flirting with Skills but from the looks of it shes playin hard-ta-get/ Im on top-of-the-show, put a dam in ya mouth straight stoppin-ur-flow/ Call me a clumsy gardener..cuz this wont b the first time Im droppin-this-hoe/ |
Lets Get Some Votes.........................
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wat that guy said peace |
$$UPREME = your shit was good had some really good punches and was easy to read with a good flow
D~Illar~1 = i enjoyed readin this one. had a lot of good punches flowed nicely to. over all i vote D~Illar~1 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
Sorry D~illar~1...
I Wasn't Feeling Your Verse... 2 Much Filler.... Bad Structure..... |
*smirks*
sorry supreme i wasnt feeling your verse ....shit punches ....self rep{it mite win against newbs & herbs like yourself} .... shit was played Overall i vote d~illar~1....cuz the other guy can't hack being fucked up :rolleyes: |
UUUUUUUUUUUppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin nnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Bro, I Don't Want 2 Burst Your Bubble...
But I Was More Elevated,then Yours'......filler...that's All U Had... Plus That Vote Won't Even Count'... |
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Uppin |
^^Stop Tryin 2 sway votes herb...
i counted 1 punch that was aight.... talkin bout shit with sauce n all that whack shit....{not a punch-h-o-m-o} Gay jokes..are weak punches...learn that...played... Learn 2 throw a decent punch..construct a decent spit....n then say u r close 2 my level... Until then...stfu nuff said... :rolleyes:..... herbs these days |
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