Demobx vs Triple_N
 

Ah'ight here the rules
No d/r votes
Crew votes allowed(if u cool wit that)
Spits due in 30 mins
I'll drop first
u spit 30 mins after I drop
10-20 line spits

yo man check in, an let me know if u cool wit crew votes

aight whatever man i aint got no crew so i really dont care

ah'ight then son I'm dropping my shit right now!!!!

Ya rhymes are tasteless and blan like spam
U to gay to rap, u take more cumshots than diapharms
You stay talkin' bout all the heat ya rhymes bring
But forget to mention that u eat more ass than g-strings
The truth about u will give the whole forum a real scare
Cuz fact is ya can't spit cuz you stay chockin' on ball hair
Its sad cuz you think your style clever and witty
Reality is its played an overused like janet jackson titty
I stay wit 2 techs but I never get ejected
If wack was a disese you'd be the first bitch infected
The fact that you pick a mic should be a federal crime
Cuz even if you hollared at ya rhymes, u couldn't "pick up lines"
I stay wit my twins, but I ain't talkin' bout serena an venus
Cuz my punches cum so hard they leave you tatsin' penis
You hypnotize but my rhymes skills mattery of patterns
An dizzy cuz my punches put more rings around ya head than saturn

Hold That, Son reppin' Southside Queens in this mothafucka Holla!!!!!

ah'ight son I drop my shit in less than 30 mins, now you got 30 mins to drop your shit

Alright I'll vote on this after you guys vote on mine, usually I'm not sticky like this, but I've voted on about 10 battles today and no one had checked mine out.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120460

Damn son drop somethin already, it was pose to be 30 mins an u pushin' a hour

Dogz, you say u a cat from NYC
u nothin but a pussy
run to yo' mum's when the gun starts introducing- bullets with my name ready to aim for u to start producing- the body parts u gonna wind up losing

Piece by piece each member of your crew sees what i see a whimp so they go and head out and leave on the sneak
tip cant bear the embarassment' of having a chick wip
leave ya vegative mode with my pimp hand quick
get caught in the mix of things get played like a set of strings
for your life u cling cause the first line i dropped u heard the death bell ring
i took a swing direct hit -now ya teeth grit- till they chip- like you took ten hits of ex now your head splits
ya see the trick is you dont fuck with this bronx soldiette fuck u and your whole entire set
you say u a thug u never broke a sweat my persona- got u gonnas -in my sauna -got u pet
And I rep for my whole entire city u homothug take it in the ass cause u consistently talking something dickley your crew should be mickey and his cast in disney
i hear the symphony of a heart breakin triple n stands for nigga not winning nathen
a virgin who still learning masterbatin when he was six his dick he started duck taping
Ya BITCH


Ha Ha Ha Its all love

not much of a battle here, wasn't really feel'n these punches
"tip cant bear the embarassment' of having a chick wip
leave ya vegative mode with my pimp hand quick"

"ya see the trick is you dont fuck with this bronx soldiette fuck u and your whole entire set
you say u a thug u never broke a sweat my persona- got u gonnas -in my sauna -got u pet"


This was a good opener, had me laugh'n
"U to gay to rap, u take more cumshots than diapharms
You stay talkin' bout all the heat ya rhymes bring
But forget to mention that u eat more ass than g-strings"

Demobx, yer verse was hard to follow cause the flow was kinda choppy, either the lines was to long or to short there was to parameter, or hence (flow)

I'd give this to Triple N for flow and punches,

What do i do in these situations, do i live up to everyones expectations, should react to this big problems, what do i do in these situations.

I feel like nothings ever changing in my life i an't got a girl or anything good going for my life, my lyrics will just throw u into hysterics i got a fine mind to wine u up like a clock till your broken down nealing on the ground. You never heard of an iller mc ever problbly explains that i do take pills that kill me inside and make my mind hullisinate and tempt fate everytime. I feel like my head has been hit by a million hammers crushing my skull till it's desintergrated and gone. All i see is anger painful tears and upset,always circling in the same direction but acually never going anywhere. I hate growing up and i hate the thought of dieing, but sometimes don't see what's the point of living and careing. im only seixteen but learned i an't keen on life the way its been treating me feels like ive been beaten to death takeing my spirit and tawn away and never to be seen again. I lost friends from my past that i miss and new people in my life who i simply detest now im gonna do a runna and leave my past behind me and pull my pants down forget about the past and make everyone kiss my ass.

My Big Vote
 

Triple N:
I know, you know, we all know that your all about openers, I wasn't really feelin' ya opener this time dawg. Good punches and personly's, I didn't see any Multi's that really stood out. Your Vocab. was over Demobx's head, You have this area covered well. Good flow.
Best Line to me:
The fact that you pick a mic should be a federal crime
Cuz even if you hollared at ya rhymes, u couldn't "pick up lines"
Another Big check on your flow was the closer, I was feelin' this hot bar:
You hypnotize but my rhymes skills mattery of patterns
An dizzy cuz my punches put more rings around ya head than saturn

Demobx:
You had a complicated and unorganized structure, try to shorten your lines up, your long scheme threw some of your lines off. Not much personly's, You had some decent Punches, but Triple N had stronger.
Best Line to me:
get caught in the mix of things get played like a set of strings
for your life u cling cause the first line i dropped u heard the death bell ring
Another line that stood out was this:
ya see the trick is you dont fuck with this bronx soldiette fuck u and your whole entire set
you say u a thug u never broke a sweat my persona- got u gonnas -in my sauna -got u pet
This was a great example of wordplay, nice job on that.

Structure- Triple N
Punches- Triple N
Personly's- Tie
Wordplay- Demobx
Vocab- Triple N

My vote goes to Triple N, great battle.

Uppin for some well explained votes y'all^^^^^^^^^

nice battle people sleepin as usual

demo i liked ya wordplay didnt just drop it on one bar or somethin you stayed consistant and you ahd some nice personals 2 nice shit overall good verse just work on uppin vocab and your structure and harder hittin punchs

n nice shit again hard hittin punchs taht stayed consistant good job on focusin on your opponent nice personals 2 opener and closer where both pretty sick and good wordplay overall tight verse i was fealin it stayed consistant an didnt really see if fall off anywhere

vote triple n

demo you got some talent go drop 10 lines in royal sickness lol

i have to give this to triple _n he merked that clown
overall for triple n 25 /30 solid performence
punches 9/10
flow 9/10
style 7/10
overall dmbx you got merked you wre 15/30
punches 5/10
flow5/10
style 5/10