Jay_Dogg vs Yung Duke
 

ok man u know the rules n shit

you spit first

I'ma murder this kid, man he dont spit nothin but shitty flows,
My verse'll rape you, I'm talkin penetratin ya shitty hole,
these NewB's keep comin for more, I'm feelin like my flow is addictin them,
So I'll be takin you to school, and losin is on ya Curriculum,
Ask anyone on the site, I'ma beast, and u brought out the growl in me,
I'm like Sub Zero on Deadly alliance the way I spit my fatalities,
and Jay Dogg is the gayest name i've ever seen on the site,
but i guess it fits since you're the gayest nigga I've ever seen in my life,
Come on man I'm one of the elite on this shit,
Jay_Dogg vs Yung Duke? this battle was over before i even spit...

~Yung G's Entertainment~

you up cuz dont be feedin off my shit either

and for all the voters, you can check any of my other battles, this is nowhere near full potential

Young Duke if you win this shit it will be a fluke/
when i spit its like droppin a nuke and your shit just makes me wanna puke/
you in my yard now son and when you hear me bark u better run/
you must be whack takin on a newbie thinkin your shits gonna run straight through me/
so listen up you homo fag when im done the duke is gonna be runnin up a tree/
like a little pussy but he aint no cat this dipshit aint nothin but a wussie/
so now the dogg got you cornerd you should be fuckin honered/
i could make this shit a number1 hit faster than me rubbin your mamas clit/
so this is it im through with this tit gettin fed up of his lame ass shit/
can you see the light if thats cause i just knocked you the fuck out whith a rhym this tight/
so ill go now and say night night this shit is over i won the fight/

Jay dogg you need to work on ya set up line
like this
you in my yard now son when you hear me bark you better run/
elevate ya skillz some.
punchez and all went to yung duke.
just a better overall verse.

cheers man keep all the advice comin please help a guy out

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Yung Duke won this one.Jay Dog,although this may be your best rap I've seen so far,it was not good enough to beat Yung Duke.Jay,your flow was off man.Keep each line around the same #of sllyables.Your punches were not all that special either.

Votr-Yung Duke

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I am going to give this battle to Young for better flow and harder hitten punches, both of you did your own thing I was just feeling Young more, wit his flow.. also Jay you need to work on your flow abit and throw in some personals and some harder punches. Vote - Young

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