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Killah Bwoy 04-24-04 09:43 AM

killah bwoy vs jay_dogg
 
lets go

10 lines
no d/r cv or biting
you go first
no feedin
good luck

Jay_Dogg 04-24-04 09:50 AM

you better give your crew a shout, Hearts is what im rippin out/
blood is what you'll be pissin out, I'll tear through you without a doubt/
this be the dog pound where bitches scream/
make you piss yoursel like its a wet dream/
sept this time when you wake up ill be in your face/
poundin on your head with a mother fuckin mace/
knockin you straight out of this fuckin race, put your ass back into place/
rearange your face, make shure your own mother dont know you/
put new tread on your ass with my shoe, make you scream when i go boo/
fuck this shit im through, lets see what you can do/

Killah Bwoy 04-24-04 10:17 AM

Like ps2 when it first came out, "You'll Get Owned Quick" ....../
Rip out your fuckin ribs so you can suck your own Dick......../
first part of my name says "killah" 'cause im a mass murdera...../
I aint hidin shit Expose my face I dont need a Mask To Murder-ya....
Never tell me to "get a grip" 'cause i jus' might take my AK..../
Kid got away too-day but I'll be robbin' this punk on Pay-DAY...../
Lets play bone collector imma be the decomposer....../
Its gonna take more than a song with Jay- to get you some exposer...../
dawg you wack this battle aint even close like a kid with broken contacts..../
Face it dawg even if you was fuckin ja rule you couldn't "CLap Back"



i freestyled that shit..no thought into it wat so ever...but its over :)

Jay_Dogg 04-24-04 10:43 AM

uppin for votes

Killah Bwoy 04-24-04 11:24 AM

UPN this shit.......lets go nucccca/...............

K-Trin 04-24-04 12:03 PM

Well Jay Dog,you had some OK punches,but flow was bad and get rid of fillers.poundin on your head with a mother fuckin mace/
knockin you straight out of this fuckin race, put your ass back into place/
^^^^
see,the problem with these are that you had "mother fuckin" in 1st. line as a filler.I don't know if you trying to look hard or what,but get rid of it.It ruins the rap's flow and structure.But still,I 'm seeing an improvement in each&every rap u do.Keep goin Jay Dog.You gettin better.No matter how much u lose,don't give up.

Vote-Killah Boy

Come on guys,I voted in ur honestly,now return the favor.Go in front lines and to the raps that says Shady1132.

Killah Bwoy 04-24-04 01:08 PM

shady u didnt poll vote...........................................

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 04-24-04 03:13 PM

i'd say killah bowoy took it in punches but ay i cant vote so what can i do

well ne way his oppenet had allright punches dint hurt nether and or Connet so i dint like that well im out 1

Pop Lotty 04-24-04 03:21 PM

I See It Like This
Battles R For Punches And Killah Came Harder Wit The Creative Punches So.........
Vot:killah

iamthatdude87 04-24-04 03:23 PM

My vote goes wit killa he had good punchlines and flow and wordplay was good
jay dogg once u get more expierence battlein on this site u should rematch him
u got potential vote killa

vote on Ecko vs Flow Intelligent i voted so return the favor

K-Trin 04-24-04 03:24 PM

OOPS.Sorry Killah for forgetting to vote.I'll vote now.

FLooZe 04-24-04 05:07 PM

killah boy wins in my mind wit better flow,opener,closing,everything. better luck next time jay dogg

Diagnose 04-24-04 07:01 PM

come on..

punch: kill
thought into it: kill
multi: kill

hey jay...work on ur rhymes...they were just to simple..aight..u hear me...


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