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XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 04-24-04 05:30 PM

YungAMO VS XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
 
10 To 20 Lines
No D/r Votes
No Unexplain Votes

Lets Get It Started// U Go 1st Since U Da Realist

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 04-25-04 03:41 PM

Nigga Hurry Up And Spit Damn Nigga U Afraid To Get Merked//

YungAMO 04-25-04 03:53 PM

listen to the voice in ya head its tellin ya wat to do/if u goin against me ya actin a fool//now i said i was the illest and im bout to prove it/the realest is me if u have to choose it//keep poppin nigga hold two gunz up/sread ya blood everywhere just to fill two cups up//i stay strapped and rap all in one/punk pussy niggas and im the only one wit a gun//lyrical leader and it was the third day/respect my gangsta or get used for an A.K.//bunch of crip bunch a bloodzthey respectin me so i show my luv//a nigga named Toxic dont got the Verbz to spit/so i hook u up wit some help and keep his ass lit//aint no thang for me to murder wit a rap/knok u out wit the bak of my strap//crazy
nigga didnt think u could do/so if i win then ur ass is screwed//wat ya lippin now because i was late/im battlin u and u aint even on my rate//dont stik around u might as well quite/cause my flows are so ill i could make ya mama sik//im a wicked nigga my heart is cold/when im done beaten u ur soul i stole//whose the realest u said yourself/
its YungAMO sittin niggas in perfect health//this is my first battle im gonna take it away/just remember homeboi YungAMO real and he dont ever play//but mad props for exceptin my challenge/strike from the back so u lose your balance//its already over i dun won the game/but ya on your end thinkin the same//so im gonna end this real
quik/wit a pop u while u suckin a niggas dick

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 04-25-04 03:59 PM

What Da Fuck// Damn Kid U Suckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk// Nigga U Just Dont Know// Iam Going To Murder U Lol// Hold Up Lil Kid

YungAMO 04-25-04 04:15 PM

suk nigga im makin u famous and where the fuck is your verse

YungAMO 04-25-04 04:47 PM

hurry up nigga damn u cant write down ur shit before u spit

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 04-25-04 05:42 PM

You’ll watch as I get attention from the media
For writing more raps than words in the encyclopedia
You can’t even touch my criteria without being infected
With strains of dangerous bacteria, raw talent is respected
Punching me with lines that haven’t connected, misdirected
My lyrics are groovin, it’s a proven scientific law like gravity
Bomb your city then shoot bullets of lead to your chest cavity
These raps are of my own creation, spreading through a nation
Like hurricane vibrations, you want to battle, name the location
This challenge is won, I’ll break the 206 bones in your skeleton
If my rhymes miss, I’ll rig you up with 50 tons of blasting gelatin
I got you sized up with metric measure, you got a small anatomy
You’re fucked rookie who just graduated from the rhyme academy
Try to shoot this duck out of the pond, a specialist like James Bond
Bitch don’t even respond, the best from 2004 and the years beyond
I didn’t even read your verse, that right I’m just that musically diverse
Running through emcee’s like an Egyptian curse, your so much worse
I’m the punch line connector and I’m out to destroy your cloning vector
Your like a blooming flower and I’m like the killer bee stealing the nectar
A dihybrid cross between man and a rapping machine and your not seen

PLX KID YO SO YOUNG NOT ENOUGH AMO TO BLOW TOXIC// U IN MY GRAVEYARD KID//

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 04-25-04 05:44 PM

U Got Merked Kid U On My Merk List Lol Lol Lol Lol Lol Lol

LostChild 04-25-04 07:17 PM

I swear x gets better ever battle he has

Rookie you got some nice as lyrics but you need to write your lines where there better to read which bring out your punchlines more

Toxic just was hard the entire flow was good very good vocab

yall know who one

FLooZe 04-25-04 07:35 PM

toxic is tha undisputed rap battle masta.if any of yall disagree you got some problems or a good reason for contradiction.hes tha hottest thang right now on RB and damn what is there to say? that shit was tight.the battle was one way and one way only,in toxics direction

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 04-25-04 08:34 PM

Damn Right Yall Betta Know Who's Da Illiest Comin Fo U Class Sic Leada// Get Ready Lil Nigga

K-Trin 04-25-04 09:30 PM

Toxic waon this one easily.He had it in all catergories.Yugamo,try to make ur rhymes longer......they were way to simple.And try not to rhyme 2 same words together.If you got a really nice punch that has you rhyming 2 same words,then go for it.Never take shit out if you got a mad nice punch going.Punches has the biggest say in battles.But in ur rap,you rhymed "it" wit "it" and the punch was not all that.It hard to make a nice punch is ur lines are like 5 words long,so make it larger.When you get better,you will find out which lenght of ur lines u feel most comfortable with,so keep battling.Build ur skills up and challenge this guy again.

K-Trin 04-25-04 09:32 PM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120187

^^^ and please vote in my battle.

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 04-25-04 09:39 PM

Iz U Crazy Shady// I'll Murder Him Again//i'll Be Glad To Go Again// Shit Add Mo Niggas On My Merk List

Vc 04-25-04 09:48 PM

aight.... now this cat toxic definitely got this abttle won... first off.. what the fuck was yungamo doin??his verse and the structure is super awful!!!...... but wordplay and everythign was taken by toxic his wordplay was better hsi structure HELL OF A LOT BETTER!....SO MY VOTE GOES TO TOXIC.


I VOTED ON YA BATTLE NOW VOTE ON MINES...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120368


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