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Darkman 04-25-04 09:13 AM

ventin my anger
 
jus need to vent out a little anger, shit's got me stressed out, you know how it is...

yo, see me
cut thru ya back door wieldin a chainsaw,
witness da kinda shit ya never seen before,
S2K straight up thugs to da core, we be a
lyrical army ready for war,
hitcha widda military mentality,
flow so dark i leave my enemies,
on da floor as lyrical casualties, da
ones da violate end up fatalities, it's
Darkman lyrically machine gunner, i'd
turn da fattest man into da world's best runner, ya
see my flow's like a lyrical inferno, i
burn my foes like i was a bunsen bu'ner, my
flows make a boy choke like cyanide,
bear witness to da one widda Darkside, i
flow when i'm in da illest state of mind,
blowin mikes up like dynamite :shocked: :banghead: :shocked:

Perpetu-ill 04-25-04 11:54 AM

your rhyme sheme wasnt good, you need to work on that

HeXen 04-25-04 01:31 PM

not very good...evalute in all aspects...flow was shit....lines didnt match....good effort but not dat good...pz

White Light 04-25-04 02:16 PM

yo i thought dat shit was pretty good keep it commin.................

techrhymes 04-25-04 05:44 PM

dat shit was iight my biller

luminaz 04-26-04 05:45 PM

flow
 
It was alrite, pretty funny bout the worlds best runner

:shoot:


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