Certified Vz choppa--city
 

10-12 lines all tha usual shit...verse dropped by 12pm monday night peaZ!

heat
 

where is the rap rap now so i can now 4 one of ya'll
hurry up

u gonna drop wat????u asked fo this no???ask me ya drop 1st

aight wateva ill drop 1st


not even packin ma tools/ coz this boards-rules-only allow ya to battle a buncha 'noobz',
so i 'refused' this bar of harsh language to 'abuze' , a kid '13' still at 'school'- learning how to count invisible 'pubes!,
Not even a credible 'battle-nah- its me the adult-, replacing this babies rattle with a lyrical tackle,
u think teethinig is harsh, but each punch ya get from me is actually breaking each onea ya tooths enamelz,
Id bet...This Bitch connectz to that net , jus hoping one 'day', his battles gonna get him sum label to rep...
but on every of the favourite-battle-links he got checked...loosing one is like an incentiv to comit suicidal steps,
Accept ure never gonna get 'anywhere' offa forum advice, ya making bandwiths bleed,
you battling to win with de-cree, is like getting a razor to D. R. 'E'- an pushing for his hair to furtherly recced,
:laugh2:
Finnally bitch, ya attempt is basic, ya 'tard' cunt do 'melody' packing a harp with 72 chords.....
fools expecting street credible aplause when his whole carrer exists only on net-ceeing internet boards!,




got im tired urry wity verse

yo man ill murder yo lyrics,and leave yo type ups dead........
blow yo head off yo shoulders,and use yo words against u instead.....
spit these flames make u swallow my rhymes.........
hit u wit consective punches make it fracture yo spine.......
take yo ass to tutorials and tell em teach u structure linez.....
yo punchlines dont hit nuttin its like u swingin at air........
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^^^^ that was better than yo whole yo verse right there.....
my punches move like casious,yours dont even fracture......
call 1-800-hooked on phonix and get some practice....
steppin in 2 da frontlines homie u gotz 2 be acting......
u aient up on my hieghts ill embarass u like justin did janet jackson.......
next time try sumbody new 2 RB, u jus a beginner.....
im a certified emmece,u aient even a certified winner.......
steppin up u get knocked down homie u reckless.......
if u call 4 a rematch its still 5-0 in dis text bitch........
u lucky if u a even get on a person who 0-50 respect list.....

aight........nice,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,

nice drop

uppin 4 votes..........................

i'll vote on this if yall do this 1st...honest to god i will vote on this in return

QUICKPUNCH VS swampsouljah707 (EXPLAIN UR VOTES AND BE HONESt)

hair, should be hair line.................fack.......

LMFAOO i cant vote on this battle but that pubes line certified said was fuckin' jokez mayn nice shit certified rep da crew

^^i try:D upin.....................................

certified
not even packin ma tools/ coz this boards-rules-only allow ya to battle a buncha 'noobz',
so i 'refused' this bar of harsh language to 'abuze' , a kid '13' still at 'school'- learning how to count invisible 'pubes!, good multies. nice ass flow, and good use of vocabulary' choice of words
sick punches, but im still pretty new to the game so i didnt understand every line but it was a sick verse for sure.
but on every of the favourite-battle-links he got checked...loosing one is like an incentiv to comit suicidal steps,
Finnally bitch, ya attempt is basic, ya 'tard' cunt do 'melody' packing a harp with 72 chords.....
fools expecting street credible aplause when his whole carrer exists only on net-ceeing internet boards!,


better flow and easier read than certified
flow lacked at some parts
good personal, better personals
his best punches
next time try sumbody new 2 RB, u jus a beginner.....
im a certified emmece,u aient even a certified winner.......
sorry man. u were good but certified came with more complexity of vocab. and his punches ultimately made the difference......peace no hate

sorry my explanation fucked up....certified hit harder with punches, better use of wordplay, and multies. his rhyme was more complex............annd cohopper was good but his was basic...certified needs more puncehs

aight 1-0 thnx drop a link an ill return tha favour

certified overall: 19/25 not bad really good
you need to elevate an dwork on ya shyt other than that its good
bestline:not even packin ma tools/ coz this boards-rules-only allow ya to battle a buncha 'noobz',
so i 'refused' this bar of harsh language to 'abuze' , a kid '13' still at 'school'- learning how to count invisible 'pubes!,
that shyt was funny lol
choppa 21/25 reall good punches
your best line:next time try sumbody new 2 RB, u jus a beginner.....
im a certified emmece,u aient even a certified winner.......
vote choppa city