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XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 04-25-04 11:00 PM

discharge VS XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
 
10 To 15 Lines
No D/r Votes
No Unexplain Votes


U Spit 1st

shadow 04-25-04 11:09 PM

iight checkin in checkin in 30 minute time limit??

shadow 04-25-04 11:29 PM

no feedin off my verse
you should be ashamed to call ya self toxic verbs..//
you got no chance just disperse before i hit you with this verse//
when im done your bitch-ass will be lost fo words//
none of ya shyts toxic its just plain fuckin weak//
and is terrible cuz youve already hit ya lyrical peak//
if i were you id be to emmbaressed to speak//
youve lost two in a row and its gonna be ya next defeat//
your not a real mc your a fuckin fake//
tryin to battle me was your fatal mistake//
its people like u i hate,you call ya self toxic but cant intoxicate//
you lie so im irrate,you steal ya shit you cant fabricate//
its you that ill annihalate,i won this in tha starting gate//
your punches are like a dick watching oprah limp and soft//
ill go get my mom and let her finish you off, your punches dont work//
you talk shyt but your the one that just got murked//

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 04-25-04 11:32 PM

Yo Yo Check In Check In// Lets Go No Waitin Till No Fuckin Tomorrow

shadow 04-25-04 11:32 PM

u aint gonna murk shyt bitch post ya shyt come on check in

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 04-25-04 11:36 PM

cant defeat me
cuz u cant beat what u cant see
if i ever seen a wackass ho like u then id have u runnin from me
commin at u with words razorsharp and hard enough ta slice through trees lika machette
i stand at attention when i get to the mic so u betta listen// u fucked up cunt ofa dike
u think any of the shit u type sounds right
any lil kid with a 3rd grade brain span can understand and wirte down what u can with an unsteady hand
in this game ur lost
runnin round day after day ina maze lika chicken with its head cut off
ur astounded and amazed hangin on each and every word and phrase that i say
why else would u come back to try to retaliate and attack with ur wack no talent raps anyway
u sitin there witha star-struck gaze
u cant seem ta pull ur imprompt eyez away
ur too fuckin incompotent and illiterat to come up wit the kinda shit i spit
on ur part it would take sum sorta intellegence
u cant win when u go up against this quick witted BLCK kid filled and fulled with this much lyrical confidnce
now i pull out my highlander sword towards ur abominal rhymes and raps so i can demolish em with it
SHIT is what u write and u seem ta be fulla it
but its ok keep stickin with it
u suck worst then most but u dont yet have to admit it
fuck u and ur bullshit
im finished with it

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 04-25-04 11:36 PM

Yo Nigga U On My Merk List Lol Lol Lol Lol Lol Lol Lil Fagget

shadow 04-25-04 11:39 PM

wtf u said 10 - 15 lines man what the fuck that was lie 30 u fuckin peice of shyt

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 04-25-04 11:39 PM

Yo Vote Vote Vote Vote Lets End Dis Shit// Lets Close It People

shadow 04-25-04 11:40 PM

u aint gonna murk shyt that right there was 30 lines of shyt

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 04-25-04 11:41 PM

So What U Want Me To Do? Tell Me What U Want Me To Do

shadow 04-25-04 11:45 PM

nothin but dont say shyt like only post 15 lines and then you post 35 lines of straight garbage your fuckin wack

Triple_N 04-25-04 11:58 PM

Very very boring battle....neither one of you brought any heat at all, discharge u had no real punches, no wordplay, basic vocab, bad opener & closer, only pluses in your verse was you had good use of multies, good flow, an good structure, not a good verse dogg u gotta elevate for real son
Toxic...same shit no punches, no wordplay, ok vocab, bad opener & closer, no multies, bad flow, bad structure, not good son, got alot of practice ahead of you.
Punches: Tie (both weak)
Personals: Tie (none present)
Flow: Discharge
Structure: Discharge
Opener: Tie
Closer: Tie
Vocab: Toxic ( jus by a lil)
Multies: Discharge( won the battle for you)
Y'all got to do better
Vote: Discharge

Daclassic 04-26-04 12:00 AM

oh im sorry to say but that was a bullshyt ass vote there is no way he got that vote

shadow 04-26-04 12:02 AM

he spit like 30 more lines than me hes a fucking cheater and should be banned


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