Hybrid Vs Lungs
 

10 Lines
No dr/hate
Lungs spits first
( so I know you show )

good luck
peace.

can we make it 15 lines and 30 minutes if u say yes then will start the 30 minutes then

yes - ok 15 lines max 30 minutes each so afta you post i get 30 minutes from ur post to do mine.

peace

check

for me this is gonna be a walk in the park
your the little kid, im M.J. (michael jackson), and were in the dark
dont get it twisted im the #1 draft pick like eli,
my raps are jason biggs and yours r just an amercan pie
ur names hybrid well i got my own fuckin theroy,
ur a joke, a cartoon like tom and jerry
why u gotta rap after me, so u got more time to think?
well ur jokes are like a laffey taffy they all fuck'n stink
im like macho man randy savage cause ill whoop ur ass all over the map
ur like macho man randy savage cause ur ass cant rap (macho man had a rap album it was horrible)
so snap into a slim jim and give up ur rap dream
and keep slap'n ur slim jim cause eventually youl cream
and when u go through puberty youl do it in a dream
now im hammerin the final nails to ur casket right here,
and now i ride away with another kill like a musketeer

need time extension of a day when i sign on tomorrow i'll start my half hour time then
im not pre-writeing i just gotta go i'll do my verse 2morrow in half an hour cya den peace.

I'll have to slap this bitch's ass redder than his neck
i look around i see him sucking on another man's peck
Lungs needed half an hour, to spit his verse
air aint wat you release, its shit, you had reherse
for you, wackness is definitively a second nature
you wash yourself to get rid of the smell of failure
by your signature i can see your a wrestling fan
so you like seeing two men grabbing on each others can’s
I've popped his Lungs from his so called location
Just another 2pac dikrider, who's a bald caucasian
as this bitch is deflated, feeling hated cause he's jirated
by words that puncture his lung tissue, he's desalted
ive squeezed this organ till the carbon-dioxide left
and now ive left him tottally short for breath.





lets get the votes rolling will return favour.

Hybrid killed it with the flow. I think the punches could have been better on both parts.
I know u didnt mean it lungs but u dissed yaself with that Micheal shit (Which is played out anyway). I wasnt feelin either one too much, but im gonna have to vote Hybrid just because of the flow. No beef lungs im just being honest i thought u held your own but Hybrid was a little better.

Vote on mine honestly
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120823

i agree wit kill hybrid did kill it wit his flow and both of ur punches could of did better u both did good but both could of elevated...lungs wasnt feelin u at all keep at it though u will do better vote goes to hybrid yo since i voted vote on my battle wit killa
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120934

Upping please vote i will return favour thanx peace.

yo hybrid got this one, sorry i just call it how i c it
hybrid had some koo punches, although it wasnt his strong point, it got it done
"I've popped his Lungs from his so called location
Just another 2pac dikrider, who's a bald caucasian"
wut i likes was the good use of vocab, creativity, and good burns(personals)
-the downside was the closer, which was a disapointment to the overall flow

lungs: u had some koo shyt, and i was wit u most of the way, with the word play, and the punches
but to me u phucked up with the tom & jerry, and the macho man "slim jim" savage
not enuf detail to lyricism 4 me

peace
vote: hybrid

Upping - when u vote drop a link at the bottom of your post and i will return the favour honest votes ofcoarse. peace

Upping- Please vote i will return the favour with an honest vote in ur battle thanx peace.

Upping please vote and leave a link and i'll get back at ya peace.

UPPING, this is getting annoying its 3-0 my way but please vote honestly.

"I've popped his Lungs from his so called location
Just another 2pac dikrider, who's a bald caucasian"
^^^^
lmao, mad creative.....

Hybrid had decent flow throughout with nice personals n good punches...

lungs, ure punches were real choppy, personals? flow was ok but off a lil, u lacked the killer punches that actually win battles but ive seen worse.....

just elevate a lil more.....

vote-----goes to hybrid, better punches, creativitie, personals, better everything really....