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:Krysis: 04-26-04 07:23 AM

another key...
 
sum ish i key'd up freestylin wit ma crew.......

This lack of communication is killin a nation, thats what sparked off this creation--
like a gas station, dont spark-shit or u will get blown-up -
and like an elevator i will surely show-u-up, or take-u-down, what goes around comes around-
and if u cant swim then u about to drown--
you hear the sound? fuck nah, cuz this shits text-
but still i'll bust a sick flow that'll get yall vexed-
who wants some? who wants Next?, if coke fucks u up this mix of lyrix'll get u wrecked--
I got u in check, pinpoint, snipered down in ma scope-
do u got hope? cuz up against me, do u think u can really cope?--
I'm similar to the pope, cuz i've been touched-by-god -
see i spit lightnin out ma mouth always endin wit iron rods--
I aint a fellon, but ma flows bring armageddon, u get a lyrikal tellin, but i aint yellin, cuz when theres more than me! theres rebellin---

shit was free'd in 5-8 min, feedback plz.........

:Krysis: 04-27-04 04:38 AM

up'n.....

Mentalz 04-27-04 06:12 AM

Sounds like a freestyle...Good if it is...If it isnt a freestyle you need to Elevate. It's quite hard to free with text unless its on messenger or something.

:Krysis: 04-27-04 07:25 AM

^^^thnx 4 feedback, i'll check ya skripts son....

messenger
^^^^
yup, u guessed it.......lol, crazy keystyle cyphers n shit,lol...

Killah Bwoy 04-27-04 07:53 AM

yo this was sick i like how you alwayz rhyme more than 2 or 3 times in 1 line thats sick..and u doin ur thang this was a nice freestyle right here i was feelin' it

vinman 04-27-04 07:54 AM

hey can yall vote at my bsttle against da jazz jus need two mo votes

:Krysis: 04-28-04 08:15 AM

^^^
Muthafucka, WHAT R U DOIN IN MY THREAD? get the fuck outta here, witcha no replyin vote pryin bitch ass.......i should rip u up......

:Krysis: 04-29-04 07:32 AM

up'n

Ravage 05-28-04 12:56 AM

want my reply
 
im speechless ....
(in a bad way fuckin wasting my time)
sayin u fuckin touched by god, wtf for.
cause your lyrics say so, fuckin represent this... :thefinger
guess it was a total waste of time thats a sick picture vinim, ill rep for dat


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