Cant Hold Me Down- freestyle
 

hold me down?? -NO!!!
im about 2 blow// bubblin up like a volcano//
bubblin up im about blow// so duck the fuck down cos here i go//

tick tock tick tock// glock cocked// im full of toxic//
screamin murda// only safety stops it// blocks it//
from causin trauma//tell me do u really wanna see drama// TAP TAP//
tryin 2 find my karma// smoke the weed// grow my shit like a farmer//
im a chalmer// in my dolce and gabbana//suits//
and my gucci boots//

got my bling bling and my bling bloOW ready//
do anything now// goin on heavy//
goin on heavy// goin on rowdy//
see me bun a weed// see the room gettin cloudy//
see me upgrade from a bus 2 an AUDI //TT roof down in the sun like a saudi//

not bad but needs alot of work, its funny when i read stuff from fresh uk heads cuz i see the slang we use, lol....

def elevation on vocac is needed, more creativitie is needed, flow is there kinda....

just keep on keepin on yo an u'll get it......

safe blud...

know wot your sayin g

just a freestyle, sounds better on audio!!
feedback appreciated

peace out

def elevation on vocac < sposed to b 'Vocab' lol....

and yea, always sounds good when u spit it out in audio thats the hard thing bout writin text, u gotta make sure its as good as it is when u spit it out.....

holla...

yo this shit tite on certain parts. i didnt like the first coupla bars and u should proof read be4 u lay it on here. i also didnt like the "bling" shit nor the gucci shit but i did like these

"tick tock tick tock// glock cocked// im full of toxic//
screamin murda// only safety stops it// blocks it//
from causin trauma//tell me do u really wanna see drama// TAP TAP//
tryin 2 find my karma// smoke the weed// grow my shit like a farmer//"

those were tite.



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