shadows edge vs. kingz(forced word match)
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
forced words must be bolded or something so people can
see them
bar limits:
16 bar min.
32 bar max.

forced words you must use these in your battle verse or
be d'q: contestant,transaction,negotiable,multimedia

ayo, checking in, this gonna be a good one.

checkin in
yep 2 hot propects here. i aint guna go down without a fight

My verse casts a ‘shadow’ over ya whole damn life….
….punches so accurate and precise…like a surgeons knife

but you ain’t gonna survive this surgery…your at the ‘edge’ of your existance
this kid raps about the 'same thing all the time'…and calls it 'persistence'

this bitch is ‘fake’…tryin to ‘hustle’ you…that’s a fact son
but none of the crowd gonna fall for shadow’s ‘fraudulent transaction’

scared to lose?…this bitch Pmed me askin if this battle was negotiable?
damn…his avatar is his self portrait …and he wonders why he is unsociable

I’ll murder u beyond text…could combine with sound..that’s multimedia
You could even reach ‘my level’ if you ‘used’ or ‘stood on’ an encyclopedia

Im bout to lyrically torture you…but aint gunna kill-ya-yet
When im done with you…there be nuttin left but a ‘Silhouette’

he thinks his verse has got the crowd at the ‘edge’ of their seat
I suppose that could be true…cos we are all falling asleep!

This kids says he is ‘sick’….yeh dog you look like it
Rapping like some1 tampered with ya drink…did someone spike it?

Im a solo artist…but I’ll still kill ya crew headphone murder
My verse is so well ‘structured’…its supported with a ‘girder’

I guess this kid is gonna use kings jokes…no doubt
we should call him the ‘sahara dessert’…cos of his lyrically drought

look you aint even a worthy contestant
you cudnt beat me with ya best chant

this dog can’t even defend his self, with weak punches and sad flows
but jus remember that after dark…there are no shadows!

Wow holy shit I forgot this was forced word... ok hang on I gotta rework my verse...

This cat’s 16-1, thinking battling herbs brings recognition
It’s like… I enjoy your verse but prefer the Sesame Street rendition
My second league battle, and still predicted to win
This cat spit one nice bar all his life… and already he a has been
Crack head father, dropped you so many times like your avvy
Now all Kingz say is “I wanna drop shit.. just like my daddy”
Call you a calendar, spit line after line and they all come out weak
Check it..
It’s funny, this kid call himself hard running a boutique
Ghetto? Fuck guns… this kids “last resort” is Club Med
Ever wonder why ~R~ looked at you… and promoted Phat Mic instead?*
Your music so bad, you being arrogant when you say it’s the worst
Your multimedia player cry when you play just a verse
Sickest you ever been required a dose of decongestant….
You get so few votes, you’d be a winning Survivor contestant
Plain sad when buying your verse for free is a losing transaction
Lace my verse with herbicide, now you having allergic reaction…
My win not negotiable, my verse contains no flaws
This cat just wishing for a tie the way he drops drawers/draws
Dog, this is the day of your execution, take it with pride
It’s like I’m replaying the French Revolution…

…. Because this verse is regicide.**

This should be there:

*Phat mic is the new leader of UE, Kingz crew

** regicide = the killing of a king

Be nice to get some votes on this ish...

kings nice verse, the structure was good and u had a couple of nice lines in there, although im not feeling ur opener ur closer was aight, good job

s,e good clean opener aswell as closer, nice flow although kings was beta, nice punches aswell, and very hardhittin punches
vote-shadow

drop feedback
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120828

structure was good on both threads, i liked kings "lyrical drought" line
but both lacked punchlines!
i got respect 4 shadow edge but feel, he had a weak performance this time round
there were'nt much b'tween it but im votin KINGS

oh and drop a vote on my battle so i can seal this bitch above me PEACE OUT

Wow, both of you came madd hard.

Kingz-

Flow: Decent, except the contestant/chant bar was madd short, I was kinda like WTF, but otha than that, it was pretty solid. Punches:The Murder/Girder bar was madd good. Punches was pretty good throughout. Personals: Good. The closer especially. Vocab: Good, not great though.

Fav Line:

this dog can’t even defend his self, with weak punches and sad flows
but jus remember that after dark…there are no shadows!

Shadow's Edge-

Flow: Very Solid. Very readable and easy to stay wit. Punches: Good. Opener was nice. Personals: Really fuckin' good. The club med/Instead bar was just downright nasty son. Vocab: Great. Nice use of the English Language basically.

Fav Line:

Ghetto? Fuck guns… this kids “last resort” is Club Med
Ever wonder why ~R~ looked at you… and promoted Phat Mic instead?*

Very Good job by both of you, just think Shadow brought a lil' more to the table. Real good job, it lived up to what I expected it to be, a really good, enjoyable, and close battle.

Vote/Shadow's Edge

kingz you took dis one man... you were FResh... shadow edge you were good too though but my vote goes to kingz

I think king got this 1. He brought good delivery and was good with the forced words. Dont get me wrong, the other guy was jus as good...but i felt king was more consistant wit tha punchlines. props to both tho if i could vote 4 both...i would peace!

kingz - pretty sweet opener, good use of forced words -
"I’ll murder u beyond text…could combine with sound..that’s multimedia
You could even reach ‘my level’ if you ‘used’ or ‘stood on’ an encyclopedia"
good flow, with sme hard punches.

shadow - nice opener. smooth flow throughout, jut thought kingz was a little better. An' i feel Kingz had some harder hitting punches, close battle.

Vote - Kingz

best line in this was...
Ghetto? Fuck guns… this kids “last resort” is Club Med
Ever wonder why ~R~ looked at you… and promoted Phat Mic instead?*

that was straight but overall KINGz was whoopin' ass wit' a good opener... shadow's edge- you were pretty good but kingz takin' it this time...

close but my vote: KINGz