lman_1528 vs. accomplishment
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

aight check in dis shit

aight checking in.............................

Uh oh shits boutta get reckless

yea this should be a pretty good battle................. aight this shits goin 2 be hot.........

aight just about 2 drop my shit i think hes not goin 2 show........ so i am dropping only a couple of lines of weak shit.......

Give the boy a chance at winning this battle//
At least give him a line minimum he can handle//
Unlike my skills, something that you will never defeat//
You might as well try to defeat Mohammad Ali//
Before you battle me, cuz I ain’t no wanna be//
I am ones of the realist MC’s, one of the best//
Your like “Good Will” the way your giving things away for free, like this battle//
You could atleast show up next time you decide to rap battle//

YO yo what up faggot....can't hanld me....hahhaha


...yo I'can't be handled...respected world wide...i dont know who dis hoe is...
yo we could both disapeer...come back and see who remain to be noticed.../

underestimating what you hardly saw...cuz i'm showin up like tits at mardi-gras...
kid just learnin to walk...but my punches can make you hardly crawl.../

accomp known to hit'em...commin at ya xp style not dis ms dos prompt system...
dissmiss em'...elevatin like david blaine...sky high i'm known to lift em.../

ya rhymes is "soar" that don't mean ya elevatin....
airplanes couldn't lift ya level higher than mine...i'm everest slangin..../

me an you compared is like pizza wit out sauce...just half da flavor...
even if ya ass owned mead notebook company...you couldn't have half my paper.../

ya feel my rhymes...beakya from cannibus to those plastic nines....
spit a 4 minute keystyle...but i could killya in half da time.../


new style yo....old rb reminicint no more stretched

that was some good shit but u spit late....................

8 minutes... i dont see why thats gonna be a problem....

w.e. we'll let dirtboy decide.....................

i got on at twelve o clock and wrote some shit as soon as i could... i think dirta boi is gnna allow it cuz its thursday in cali still

w.e. yo we will see 2 morrow when eva dirtboy goes online next............. but w.e. i am out of here peace..........

acomplishment took this easy
im not even comenting on imans verse its plain to see he had good structure good flow
better vocab and much better punches than iman

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vs 2bad
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120828

Easily goes to accomplishment, and here's why.

Iman-

Structure: I saw maybe 1 bar that rhymed in the whole shit, the rest of them didn't, and you tryed to close it wit rhymin' the same exact word. Come on man, U gotta do betta than that. Punches: None. Personals: None. Opener: Weak. Closer: Sucked Ass. Multis: None

Fav Line:
None

Accomplishment-

Structure: Solid. Punches: Very Solid Personals: Aight. One about Cannibus and Plastic Nines was good. Multis: Saw a few, only one need to win the category anyway. Opener: I liked that shit, very original. Closer: Very last line was kinda EEhhhhh, but the first line of the bar, like I said, was a pretty good personal.

Fav Line:

...yo I'can't be handled...respected world wide...i dont know who dis hoe is...
yo we could both disapeer...come back and see who remain to be noticed

Iman, just work on the shit I said. Accomplishment, everything was aight, A lil' too much filler I think, but It was still pretty good.

Vote: Accomplishment takes this shit easy.