2bad vs. code-187
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

checkety checkety check check

checkin in .................................................. .......................

dont duck , heres my verse

yo,checkit.................
for ur sake i hope ur not as old as ur profile says,
heard the sayin knwledge comes wit age?well not in his case
wonder why ur open mics are viewed but never rated,
looks like u just threw every word u know on the page kid,
ur dumb enough to loose a battle even if u staged-it
*2bad* u dream of fame, ur soon 2 be in-famous
for being the oldest in the leage,
with the least amount of braincells

^^^^^^^^^nothin big hes prolly gonna duck any way,
ohh and incase anyones too lazy to check his profile hes 20 years old

Now there's no point runnin// cos ya outta time
like Mortal Kombat// ya soul is mine
i shine when i rhyme// when u rhyme it's a crime
repeatedly offend and pretend that it's fine
but now you've been exposed// so the case can be closed
ya flows are not stale// there fuckin decomposed

my styles are diverse// destroy u in a verse
in fact im so confident// i've pre-booked the hearse
im like a voodoo priest// i can't help but curse
im locked in writer's block// and u still sound worse

ya rhymes are padded out more// than Britney's bra's
i'll leave u like Stephen Hawkins// cos you'll be seein stars
im confined 2 these sixteen bars// like im a killer
i'll plague u like SARS// but the effects will be iller

187 u aint worthy as a rival//quotin homicide?// ya thread was dead on arrival
im lyrically fit/ u seem 2 suffer fatigue/ rememba his name/cos u wont see it in the league

^^^lol,
ever heard of personals,

:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

lol! ever heard of winning a battle? by your record, clearly not!!
you've been sealed bitch// stick 2 your nursery rhymes

:thefinger

the only battle uv won is against *the crazy one*
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...35&page=1&pp=15

ok weak battle.....

code - you shit wasnt even long enough to be good....u played out the age personal quick...than ur otha shit was wack....jus werk on ur ish and elevate.....

BEST LINE/BAR :
ur dumb enough to loose a battle even if u staged-it

2bad - i felt your flow....werk on personals....but ur punches were decent....jus need to keep elevatin....good multi's....decent verse....

BEST LINE/BAR :
my styles are diverse// destroy u in a verse
in fact im so confident// i've pre-booked the hearse

Vote - 2bad

vote- 2bad

even though both sucked

THE LEGNTH WAS SHORT BECOZ I THOUGHT HE WERENT SHOWIN COZ WHEN I PM'D HIM TO SEE WHEN HE WAS DROPPIN HE DIDNT REPLY AND THEN HE LOGGED OFF SHORTLY AFTER

breakdown for code-187

flow:no not really it didn't even really rhyme not good here 3/10

volcab:basic arrangment here nothing special 5/10

punches:nothing really you tried to get personal using that age thing but it didn't seem to work to well best line,"for being the oldest in the leage,with the least amount of braincells" keep trying here 5/10

overall:13/30 really lackluster

breakdown for 2bad:

flow:alright alittle choppy in spots but easily better then code-187 6/10

volcab:pretty basic nothing special 5/10

punches:some alright lines nothing too strong best line,"ya rhymes are padded out more// than Britney's bra's" pretty much played topics but atleast you were throwing them 6/10

overall:17/30 pretty good verse work on the flow abit

vote--2bad takes this

3-0 2bad wins