marvolousj1009 vs. king solo
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

jea checkin in...lets get it gon

yea yea bitch the king is checkin in
Royalty just stepped into this piece!!

here's my spit that i just threw together

I’m truly the King, u claim to be the sickest on this rap site//
Ure not ready for this King fight so I’m givin u the red light//
But ure ass just keeps comin, more irritatin than a flea bite//
So I’m gonna cover u in fuel and make ure ass ready 2 ignite//

My style can’t be contained I’ll make ure whole crew explode//
Infect ure computers like a virus and make them all overload//
U can go back to mugging ladies watchin me run the royal road//
Bet y’all didn’t know he was an ex-con, J1009 is his jail code//

If this were chess I’d have u on ‘check’ ready 2 take the ‘mate’//
This ain’t no fuckin debate, the KING is gonna straight desecrate//
Tie u up and take u 2 sea, up ure ass I’ll shove a dildo-shaped weight//
Just so when u sink u’ll have pleasant memories of ure old cell-mate//

I’ll inject u wit an allergy have u looking fatter than Bizarre//
I’ll stretch to the last bar, leavin ure ass wit a permanent scar//
If this were a game of golf u’d be fuckin infinity over par//
Cuz u getting a win is more rare than seein a shootin star.//

lol

king solo dis lame is a liar,i wish everbody in his gang a retire-
look at his "banner" he not "hott" y u think his name aint on fire-[look]

u should a kept bein a cheerleader whut made u switch da spittin?-
i freestyle but ya ryhmes like "nas old album" nigga "it was written"-

fagget and beef aint shit cuzz my fam grabbin techs-
u say im pussy? u "dont know who u fuckin with" like a "blind man havin sex"-

and king dat girl u gave a ring 2 and engadged she a real hoe-
& da bitch real slow..her pussy's so nasty she gave aids 2 a dildo-

dis kid is a quer,he was born retarded cant put word da gether & missin a ear-
rap battles listen & hear,i was locked up with his pops he told em he in jail 4 rippin ya rear-
nigga dont get yaself killed and left in alaska missin 4 years-
u fukkin suck u couldn't make a "punch up" with ya "fist in da air"-

niggaz hate da see ya verse when u post,dat bullshit u just spit u wrote-
u gon lose dis battle cuzz it aint NO D/R,FEEDIN,HATIN OR CREW VOTES-
ima be da reason u ghost,with my bars or da gun i just bought a new scope-
lose hope!!!,4 comin at me with dem week "bars" i should make u chew "soap"-
nigga stop rappin go out sea and clean fish in a huge boat-
cuzz i spit da type of shit dat every last nigga in ya corny ass crew quote's-

nigga im 1009 times betta than,u'z a follow u not da head of ya crew-
damm!! i knew i shouldn't of sold moms crack when she was pregnant with u-

king pm's dis kid a fan,he say i wanna b like u matter fact dis kid is a stan-
his hottness last less seconds than "magie" from da "simpsons" could stand-
(lol..datz not long)

nigga im busy if i aint in da studio i got different tecs da order-
im in a busy while u broke closes you'll get 2 a car is a "internet-explorer-[lol]

i keep iron by da sweats,i could shoot u and leave ya brain lyin by ya kneck-
solo's a bitch u a think he won da "ncaa" how he's always "cryin by da net"-

GON....

Damn.............Marvey took this one with ease!!!!!!! He was hittin every punch in his verse. No fillers from what I saw. King solo on the other hand came pretty weak.....he didn't have any originality to his verse. It seemed too generic....

Vote - MarvolousJ1009

jea goodlooks dunn....im up 1-0

Marv spit a very hard and enjoyable verse. I think his punches knocked the King off his throne I guess you could say. King, you came really basic, as in, your style isn't different from anyone else I guess, it's run of the mill(mebe just on this one, I ain't neva seen another one of yo battles. But I think Marv was consistent in his verse, and sonned you. That's it.

Vote: MarvJ

lmaoooo@sonned u....goodlookin out dunn...2-0

yeh marv u may be winnin and u probly will end up winnin but check it
i wasnt even tryin playa
when u ready see me on the front lines 4 a real battle

^^^^lol shhh u sound like a lil ass kidd dunn...uppin 4 more votes

I LOVED THIS LINE!!!! "her pussy's so nasty she gave aids 2 a dildo"

VOTE - MARVOLoUsJ1009

- - - Break Down / Reasoning

King ya was good, i liked alot of yer punches and shit, but Marvolous takes this because his rap was all around betta, really cool battle though, alot of great disses and funnies...

jea goodlookin dunn...is it 3-0 t.k.o? or str8 5 votes

KiNg SoLo here's my spit that i just threw together

I’m truly the King, u claim to be the sickest on this rap site//
Ure not ready for this King fight so I’m givin u the red light//7
But ure ass just keeps comin, more irritatin than a flea bite//
So I’m gonna cover u in fuel and make ure ass ready 2 ignite//7

My style can’t be contained I’ll make ure whole crew explode//
Infect ure computers like a virus and make them all overload//7.5
U can go back to mugging ladies watchin me run the royal road//
Bet y’all didn’t know he was an ex-con, J1009 is his jail code//10

If this were chess I’d have u on ‘check’ ready 2 take the ‘mate’//
This ain’t no fuckin debate, the KING is gonna straight desecrate//7
Tie u up and take u 2 sea, up ure ass I’ll shove a dildo-shaped weight//
Just so when u sink u’ll have pleasant memories of ure old cell-mate//8.5

I’ll inject u wit an allergy have u looking fatter than Bizarre//
I’ll stretch to the last bar, leavin ure ass wit a permanent scar//7
If this were a game of golf u’d be fuckin infinity over par//
Cuz u getting a win is more rare than seein a shootin star.// 8



MARVOLoUsJ1009 lol

king solo dis lame is a liar,i wish everbody in his gang a retire-
look at his "banner" he not "hott" y u think his name aint on fire-[look]
8
u should a kept bein a cheerleader whut made u switch da spittin?-
i freestyle but ya ryhmes like "nas old album" nigga "it was written"-
9.5
fagget and beef aint shit cuzz my fam grabbin techs-
u say im pussy? u "dont know who u fuckin with" like a "blind man havin sex"-
8.5
and king dat girl u gave a ring 2 and engadged she a real hoe-
& da bitch real slow..her pussy's so nasty she gave aids 2 a dildo-
7.5
dis kid is a quer,he was born retarded cant put word da gether & missin a ear-
rap battles listen & hear,i was locked up with his pops he told em he in jail 4 rippin ya rear-
nigga dont get yaself killed and left in alaska missin 4 years-
u fukkin suck u couldn't make a "punch up" with ya "fist in da air"-
8
niggaz hate da see ya verse when u post,dat bullshit u just spit u wrote-
u gon lose dis battle cuzz it aint NO D/R,FEEDIN,HATIN OR CREW VOTES-
ima be da reason u ghost,with my bars or da gun i just bought a new scope-
lose hope!!!,4 comin at me with dem week "bars" i should make u chew "soap"-
nigga stop rappin go out sea and clean fish in a huge boat-
cuzz i spit da type of shit dat every last nigga in ya corny ass crew quote's-
8
nigga im 1009 times betta than,u'z a follow u not da head of ya crew-
damm!! i knew i shouldn't of sold moms crack when she was pregnant with u-
7
king pm's dis kid a fan,he say i wanna b like u matter fact dis kid is a stan-
his hottness last less seconds than "magie" from da "simpsons" could stand-
(lol..datz not long)
8
nigga im busy if i aint in da studio i got different tecs da order-
im in a busy while u broke closes you'll get 2 a car is a "internet-explorer-[lol]
7.5
i keep iron by da sweats,i could shoot u and leave ya brain lyin by ya kneck-
solo's a bitch u a think he won da "ncaa" how he's always "cryin by da net"-
8
GON....


v- MarveJ

Aight Check Dis..

I Ain't Gonna Break Dis One Down Too Much Becasue Its Obvious Who Won Dis Battle, I Mean King Came Wit Sum Hot Punches and Metas, But Marvolous Came Twice As Hard and Tore This Fucking Script Up. Nice Shit!

Vote - Marvolous

~R~