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Native 04-26-04 12:42 PM

Think for Yourself
 
Its time to wake up and see the signs of the times
Time to rewind... Then fast forward to V.2 of mankind
Then society will find that its in need of some help...
So just do us all a favor... Start to think for yourself


Programmed into roles... indifferent to if we lead or follow
Full of sorrow for the fact it seems even our time is borrowed..
Morals swallowed... Eithics erased... Everything still set on race...
Expressionless faces... increase of idiocy and trying to keep pace..
Is this how we rate? An imperialistic... power driven state?
One run by a man with a reading level of barely 8th grade...
Yet we tolerate... Back a bufoon... Hate who we're told to hate...
Declining mental states ignorant to how our ethics dissipate...
So set a date... the day when you will finally open ya eyes...
Grow to dispise... How everyone but us controls our lives

Its time to wake up and see the signs of the times
Time to rewind... Then fast forward to V.2 of mankind
Then society will find that its in need of some help...
So just do us all a favor... Start to think for yourself

Mentalz 04-26-04 08:28 PM

I enjoyed that one too, Native...I wish it was longer though.

Keep dropin cat.

Native 04-28-04 11:07 AM

dont sleep

.::N-Sight::. 04-28-04 11:39 AM

nicely rhymed


good lyrics


7.5/10


1

Identity2k 04-28-04 12:28 PM

yo tite shit dawg, nice peice, good point, nice flow, nice vocad, aight hook, but woulda been better if it was longer....


holla back at mine
I AM THE AMERICAN DREAM
BLOOD, SWEAT, and TEARS

Native 04-29-04 10:08 AM

Up.

yOuNG tIPS 04-29-04 01:14 PM

I Was Feeling The Whole Concept Of That Flow And Im Gonna Agree With Mentalz I Wish That Shut Was Also Longer Playboy.....1

PsyKOpath 04-29-04 01:55 PM

Very nice. I'm glad it was short I'm not in the mood to read an enourmass post right now.

The message was very clear, and the chorus flowed very nicely.

The flow in the verses was kind of choppy, but for a text drop it doesn't matter as much.

Overall its a pretty nice verse, although you could have used some multis to help the flow

And if you could please leave feed on a keystyle called "Adrenaline In My Head"

Peace

puertoricanelly 04-29-04 02:05 PM

nice flow B is was hott shit

Revell 04-29-04 02:38 PM

hey man that was totally top man. you droppin sum nice shit here, keep up the good work.

Native 05-01-04 01:53 PM

Up.

Enygma 05-01-04 02:04 PM

Yeah, the shit was pretty tight..... I think the flow was off a little but not that bad. The emotion behind it was strong and it showed. I also would have liked to have seen it longer.....

Native 05-01-04 09:43 PM

I may write another verse for this at some point


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