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shadow 04-26-04 06:16 PM

discharge vrs. spiky2k8
 
no dick riding
no crew votes
u spit first
5-15 lines

2Face 04-26-04 07:28 PM

u call yoself discharge but i'm at large/
this rap u fin to spit fin to make u is go'n to
make u a peace of shit/
even my dick spit better than u cuz u a man
without shit to do but u bout to lose/
u say u apart of tha lyrical-leaders but u part
of tha lyrical-losers/
but now i'm bout to serve yo ass a lose cuz
u shouldn't have went against me/
cuz now u speechless so bow down bitch cuz
this verse was sick/

shadow 04-26-04 09:37 PM

yo yo yo checkin in checkin inill spit in less than 20 minutes

shadow 04-26-04 09:58 PM

yes it discharge im a deady-nuclear-weapon,ill beat your weak ass no fucking questions//
you got the same chance as bush winnin re-election,why you in rapbattles this aint a queer convention//
i feel sorry for u u had good intentions, youll never reep the benifets of rap perfection//
you have "homo-connnection",when you see usher you start to get an errection//
should lay ya battles out for ya weak ass teams inspection,so your crew can give it a good correction//
your ryhmes arnt new just obsolete,next time dont post them just press "delete"//
you lost ur last battle and this will be a repeat,your better off goin home to "beat ur meat"//
you just suffered a "landslide defeat" the "proofs in tha pooding" you shouldnt need a reciept//
see you learned a "valuable lesson",my ryhmes are uniqe,dont try to battle a lyrical leader your fucking weak//

shadow 04-26-04 09:59 PM

upin upin upin upin for for for vtes votes votes..

sun jian 04-26-04 10:01 PM

that was tight.............................................

Rising Sun 04-26-04 10:25 PM

k this isnt even a battle...discharge coulda done much better but he has easily taken this....it should not even be questioned. the other guy wasnt even trying. discharge won with more multies, ur flow was bad, better vocab, wordplay just about everything. every person on RB should kno the other cat´s shit was weak....i shouldnt even have to explain...peace

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 04-26-04 10:25 PM

imma have to say spiky once again u need better rhymes flow structure discharge flow rhymes structure normal u need better metas but i have to say THIS IS A BLOW OUT like street hoops SPIKY U ET BETTER

J Gutta 04-26-04 10:29 PM

WOAHHH!!!! are u surious dis battle was one way by far discharge took it hands down bad flow tho everythin els was aight...spiky u had no rhyming wordz haha ...vote discharge

Unknown Assassin 04-26-04 10:35 PM

very lopsided battle

spiky could have came alot stronger wit his punches you need to really work on your lines.but the fact that you keep tryin is really good kid still elevate

overall 4/10


discharge very good shit keep up da work aint much 2 say on yours overall 7/10 holla

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 04-26-04 10:39 PM

Juss like ^^^ Discharge took it by far he killed u spikyy yet SPIKY u HAD NOT ENOUGH RHYMEInG WORDS BAD structure


Dischage u did good best lines: feel sorry for u u had good intentions, youll never reep the benifets of rap perfection//
you have "homo-connnection",when you see usher you start to get an errection//
should lay ya battles out for ya weak ass teams inspection,so your crew can give it a good correction

that was nice

DIscharge:
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 8/10
Structure 5/10 Stick to the oher 1 u had before

20/30

SPiky2k8:

Flow2/10
Rhymes 1/10 i have to say u lacked VERY bad on this wun
Structure 4/10


7/30 u LACKED FLOW RHYMES STRUCTURE

Discharge U LACKED STRUCTURE


well u did very well discharge u got him good

SPiky ull get better he GOT U BAD

da jazz 04-27-04 08:15 AM

spikey rap wasn't as good it had no type of flow and punchlines
what i say discharge won cause he had creativity
my vote is discharge


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