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Unknown Assassin 04-26-04 09:35 PM

Unknown Assassin Vs Da Solution
 
Rulez are


No dickriding
No hate Votez
No Crew Votez
5-10 Lines
U spit first

Lets Go!!!!!!!!!

Da Solution 04-28-04 05:14 PM

checkkinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn innnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn i'll spit in a little while

Da Solution 04-30-04 04:43 PM

Oh no man Get 911 this calls for an emrgency
He think he can win(lol)he needs brain surgury

Cuz he's lost his mind hes obivously gone insane
He's drained/Wake up kid this anit no video game

Im sick/I'll pull a drive by while yo whole kin on the porch
After this u gotta change yo name to Unkown Corpse

Yo times is all most up don't u here da tick tock
U on Da Roc?/Oh well everyone needs a Mascot

His rhymes r worn out and limp like they been materubated
It's a shameIt was fun merking u/cuz U just been assassinated

vinman 05-03-04 06:41 PM

this should be a good one

Unknown Assassin 05-03-04 06:51 PM

alright alright time to quit playin
shut the fuck up and listen 2 what im sayin

u a urban informant aka snitch ass trick
on ya block you known as "the dick lickin bitch"

u sick/ you goddamm right you sick
this easy imma get rid of you nice and quick

you gettin mad at me cause yo flows aint tight
ill beat yo ass in ol fashion street fight

gettin all mad cause ya flows aint shit
im too good/you have no choise but too quit

if i beat you right now then ill beat you again
you like chicago bulls you just wont win

you can come back all you want but youll just get smashed
be like ludacris and just BLOW IT OUT YA ASS

Unknown Assassin 05-03-04 06:52 PM

uppppppppppppppin for votesssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

vinman 05-03-04 07:02 PM

HEY THIS WAS AN OKAY ABTTLE I EXPECTED way mo from the unknown assassin but hey heres my review and vote look down styrure wa sthe same i was glad i could read the shit both of great flow i could follow alone nice and easy

the finisher- unkown u could of won if it wasnt for weak punches like u said the word quick twice and then finished the bar off with imm gona get rid of ya quick
although YO CLOSER WAS SHIT IF IT HAD RHYMED U WOULD OF WON JUS BECAUSE OF THAT/ BUT SMASHED AND ASS DONT RHYME SORRY SOLUTION NICE PERSONAL IN THE END AND IT WAS A GOOD PUCH U TAKE THIS OVER PUNCHES

UNKNOWN- 7/ 10 SOLUTION - 8/ 10




okay the breakdown/ the solution way beta opener i like the emergency and surgery unknown playin and sayin was too damn weak come harder in yo openers

vinman 05-03-04 07:05 PM

I Meant To Say He Siad The Word Sick Twice My Bad

Da Solution 05-03-04 07:17 PM

upiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 4444444444444 votes

L.I. 05-03-04 07:29 PM

My Vote
 
Oh no man Get 911 this calls for an emrgency
He think he can win(lol)he needs brain surgury
Basic punch...simple...5/10
Cuz he's lost his mind hes obivously gone insane
He's drained/Wake up kid this anit no video game
Weak...3/10
Im sick/I'll pull a drive by while yo whole kin on the porch
After this u gotta change yo name to Unkown Corpse
Decent...7/10
Yo times is all most up don't u here da tick tock
U on Da Roc?/Oh well everyone needs a Mascot
haha...weak but funny...5/10
His rhymes r worn out and limp like they been materubated
It's a shameIt was fun merking u/cuz U just been assassinated
Weak...3/10

Verse Score - 23/50 = 46%

This verse was very weak...only one DECENT punch....u need to elevate on ya punches and worpdplay....use meta's and personals....elevate....

alright alright time to quit playin
shut the fuck up and listen 2 what im sayin
umm no punch...0/10
u a urban informant aka snitch ass trick
on ya block you known as "the dick lickin bitch"
very weak...2/10
u sick/ you goddamm right you sick
this easy imma get rid of you nice and quick
stop tellin wut ur gonna do....1/10
you gettin mad at me cause yo flows aint tight
ill beat yo ass in ol fashion street fight
again...what ur gonna do...wack...0/10
gettin all mad cause ya flows aint shit
im too good/you have no choise but too quit
gay...2/10
if i beat you right now then ill beat you again
you like chicago bulls you just wont win
no...0/10
you can come back all you want but youll just get smashed
be like ludacris and just BLOW IT OUT YA ASS
horrible...1/10

Verse Score - 6/70 = 9%

Aight this verse was horrible....u need to learn how to throw punches....go to tutorials and learn....cuz u need ALOT of work...

Vote - Da Solution for having a punch....

Da Solution 05-03-04 07:32 PM

lol sorry unknown uppinnnnnnnnnnn 4 votesPlz ?

accomplishment 05-03-04 07:35 PM

Guys Guys Guys comeone now

PLAYED VERSES ARE REALLY NOT GOOD

Listen Unknown i don't care where you are go out and give someone five dollars and buy a punch... serioussly you come with less creativity than... i dont know paper plates are more creative honestly.... Sick..Quick... Trick... bitch...

now da solution

A small amount more creativie but he actually had punches so he killed you a thousand times over just both of you guys elevate...

vote Da solution

Lyrical Demon 04 05-03-04 07:35 PM

very very very weak battle assassin sucks ass his verse needs to be burned he had no punches what so ever he needs alot of work.da solution you need work too but you were better than this sorry excuse for an emcee.

my vote goes to da solution

Lyrical Demon 04 05-03-04 07:37 PM

i cant vote for this crap yet but i will soon ill do it later

Da Solution 05-03-04 07:40 PM

thanx guys This is'nt my beast I cn really flow look 4 me in tha future


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