da jazz vs spiky2k8
 

no d/r
no hater
no biting

5 to 10 lines max

u see spiky is wanna be mc
he cant even pee out of his weewee
mess i say is fake
i'm baking cakes spiky cant have
cause i'm god son

damn got to go to work bye be back later
for som

yo da jazz it is more like kissing my ass i bet
yo ass that will be a fuckn blast/
yo rap wasn't shit but only 5 line dont waste
my time with that little shit/
u wastn yo credit that u might need a fuckn
meddit/
this rap is like humanity but yo rapn is just a
fuckn fantasy/
this aint tha blues brothers 2000 this is te real
new tha chicago blues not yo dawn blues clues/
i'm done son

i need votes now and fast
please help
a brother out nigga
please man
please man
please man

this shit sucked i mean both of you need some serious elevating cuse both of u sound horrible i dont know who to vote for ill do it later need some time to think

structure-JAzz
weak punches-both
stronger punches-spiky
This was a weak battle man...Comeone poeple you have to elevate and do more stuff than that.....Yall both need to work on everythign...Spiky came harder than jazz.
v/spikey
since he came harder than jazz but very very very very very weak
return the favor please http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...606#post1260606

comeon spiky...........vote in my battle man.....this is gettin slept...on
I helped you so help me

THIS WAS A WEAK BATTLE BUT THIS IS HOW IT WENT DOWN
SPIKEY U REALLY NEED TO ELEAVTE ALOT THIS WAS UR BEST LINE
yo da jazz it is more like kissing my ass i bet
yo ass that will be a fuckn blast/

DA JAZZ OMG TAKE A YEAR OFF THEN COME BACK WITH SOME SKILLZ PLZZ
THIS WAS UR BEST LINE
u see spiky is wanna be mc
he cant even pee out of his weewee
WAST GOOD BUT THATS ALL U HAD

FLOW=SPIKEY
PUNCHES=NEITHER
OPEN=SPIKEY
CLOSE=SPIKEY
MY VOTE=SPIKEY


PLZ VOTE AN HONEST VOTE IN ONE OF MY BATTLES THX!!!

thanx for tha votes i really appreciate it
ight people thanx ya'll
thanx you very very very much

Yo Dogg Drop A Vote In My Battle Plz Thx... Honest Vote

my vote goes to spikey cuse of his beter everything beta flow and struture and puches hey jazz keep working at it okay man pls my vote/ spikey

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Wtf was dat da jazz?? that was wack man... u had elementary rhymse..

spiky's rap wasnt so good but then thats all he needed to win this match.. props

vote=spiky

ight hook me up wit a return favor ight.. link below me against triple n

spiky took this battle

both had aight flow but work cud be done on y'all structures
there wasn't much for punches, both were pretty weak and did little damage but i thought spiky hit slightly harder
spiky took the opener and closer which is what really won this battle.

u both cud use sum elevatin
fix ure structure sum cuz that'll help out ure flow
use more hard personals and throw in sum multis to win

with harder punchlines and gud setup lines u will go far
spiky u got sum potential so just keep elevatin!!
Vote - Spiky

one more thing cuz i cant edit my post
return tha fav on my battles with honest votes playaz!!
except the one wit kingz cuz he aint spit yet!!