Second comin
 

Made dis one durin last period at skool, tell me watcha think...

Yo...i spit flow like machine gun,
When i grab da mike i turn into a mean one,
RUN...don't turn back for a second, i'll
Bus a boy in 10 sec like dis was Tekken,
Yo...my prose leaves more bloodflows, than
Punchin a haemophiliac onda nose, ya
Dun know when i flow my enemies panic,
Like a preacher surrounded by da Satanic, they
Get scared...cos i'm more than they can bear, i'll
Take out a fool anytime,anywhere,
Come wid yo rhymes and i'll come wid mine,
See me spittin shots like an Uzi 9,
Tes'in me you mus be smokin herb,
Chat one word to me n you'll get served, twen'y
Plus verbs comin like multiple attacker,
Situation's gettin hairier than Chewbacca,
D...A...R...K...man, i
Rhyme so hot i leave da mike widda tan, if a
Random fool wants t make me turn, i'll
Make im learn, mess wid fire ya get burn

u suk
 

u suk, lol

:shoot: :shoot:

fool pleez
 

luminuz i know where you live :)

Suck to the first reply! Luminaz first off get the stick out ya ass and it'll be all a dream when you loose to me or whoever mothafucka! but anyway that was really good!
well constructed and the only thing you need to work on is ya flow. so keep rhymin Holla back Young'n

Ay
 

U lost 4 battles so dnt talk like dat m8
Plus i was only jokin wit him hes my m8

Runnin' spell check takes 2 minutes....

Flowed well, lacked Vocab, Good imagery structure was ok...
6/10

Keep droppin.