Jay_Dogg vs Da~1
 

like i said man 10-15 lines
no crew, d/r, or hate votes
you spit first son

come on dawg we gonna battle or what spit your shit

ok man u took to long on replyin so ill try and post tonight if not it will be first thing tomoro mornin

peace out homie

Da~1 vs jay_dogg
 

Now I know you and Im going to eat your name raw/
Your Broke ass got everybody flooring to reach poor jay dogg/
Cus everybody feels sorry for u seeing your fat and to see your yay tall/
Know you got everybody on this site trying to give a donation/
U ant got skills rapping u spit and everybody says this hoes playin/
U permantly need to get off the microphone/
Your seeing I can rap so u want to take my lyrics u need to write ya own/
Know your mad cus im spitten these multiple syllables/
Your pissed and mad so we got to fight and i got to kill a fool/
Dont even try to say u got skill and your all fantastic/
U and got skills and u ant a man fagget/
Im the one rhyming coming to be the next there is no subsitute/
Im here for good and planted stuck from roots/
I dont even need all the lines to 15/
Cus im a rapper thats a gift teen/


Know your mad hahahahahahaha

this is my shit clearly ripping u from syllable to syllable

what
 

what u mean tonight or morning u need spit know i ant giving u all that time to write

he ant going to spit so everybdy go ahead and vote

ur defintly a newbie cuz if someone dont spit thats a nosho and an auto matic win so u got a win


if u want just vote in my battle against guyver4mk

yo im back and i dont write ma shit down so get your shit rite b4 u start runnin your mouth bitch

so you call yoursel Da~1, sounds like you cant spell son/
runnin your mouth like you got shit to say, bet ur ass weighs bout a thousand ton/
you ass is gayer than eddy may, before you posted it took all day/
back to first grade with your ass, cant spell cause you been tokin to much grass/
you and your trailer trash faggot lovin ass, better back the fuck up/
before you get smacked the fuck up, or ran over by a truck/
this bitch dont have no luck, no one gives a fuck/
where he be at, we all no his shit aint Phat, we dont want none of that/
bullshit talkin, wanna be ass walkin, rear end lovin, cock ass rammin/
thinkin you be jammin, this just in, Da~1 just aint gonna win/
thinkin you a P.I.M.P, bitch you just a mother fukin G.I.M.P/
so bitch you better start to run, realoded and lookin for fun/
gonna hunt you down 1 by 1 startin of with Da~1/

holly shit you guys suck. jay dogg was the least suckiest of the two, so he wins, but hmm woah, you guys must be new to this. that isn't bad, i sucked when i started as well. i lost my only battle here...i dunno how, i think the other dude got dick rode and prolly pm spammed people, but oh well it's the fuckin net.

first dude...learn how to rhyme better. you were braggin too much about nothing. second dude had better layout and more punches, yet they still sucked like first dude's punches. just gay this, fag that. those don't hold up too well.

vote: jay dogg

ok hes my break down

flow- jay
punches- jay
personals- tie
creativity- tie
enjoyment- tie

overall jay dogg he had tha better verse

Da~1 -
opener - wasn't feelin' that opener, not much worth sayin - 6/10
structure - was a bit jumpy, try an' keep you're bars similar in length - 6/10
best line -
"Know you got everybody on this site trying to give a donation/
U ant got skills rapping u spit and everybody says this hoes playin/" - 7/10
flow - apart from a few black spots it flowed pretty smoothly - 7/10
punches - not really gettin' the digs in, need to hit harder - 5/10

Jay_Dogg -
opener - once again, not the best opener, although if it was structured better, could have had potential 6/10
structure - pretty good structure, rhymed at the right time - 7/10
best line -
"thinkin you a P.I.M.P, bitch you just a mother fukin G.I.M.P/
so bitch you better start to run, realoded and lookin for fun/
gonna hunt you down 1 by 1 startin of with Da~1/" - 8/10
flow - flowed pretty smoothly - 7/10
punches - harder punches than da~1, gettin' a bit more personal - 7/10

vote - Jay_Dogg

yo jay_dogg, that's you're best spit yet, keep elevatin' son
you too da~1, thats the first battle i've seen you in, the potential is their

peace...

what the fuck jay-dogg y u telling everybody to vote for u when u suck u niggas need to stop hatin and give me the credit these is y i dont like battle sites cus these niggas be hatin and i know rap and i ripped his ass

i aint been tellin anyone to vote for me man i dont care if i get beat but as u can u see u must suck more bitch

uppin for votes to ko this homo