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Short Circuit
Mission Impossible//
Life Hostile// Threw Editorial// wit a Police Pictorial// a Graveyard Memorial// Moms Best Years and Pictures// Chairs and Bible Scriptures// Inmate Dialect// Gun Respect// Child Neglect// Frozen Steps// Foodstamps and Dreams In the Drain// Freezin Rain// Grounds that are Stain// Tears in The Pillow// Feinds Pipes Meshed wit Brillo// Time to reflect// Rewind the Mind Subject// Paths not set// Goals Not Accomplished// Close Failrues and Broken promise// Dysfunctional Home Family no Unity// Ruin me since Puberty// Told just U and Me// Lie's and Deceit// Eyes to the Heat// These are the Lives and Minds of Real Niggas in the STREET!........Real Talk! :cussing: |
Very heartfelt, good vocab. Moving.
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yo this shit was tite. it was nice all around and nice multis and vocab. but the structure of ur verse doesnt look like a verse juss fix up the struc. and it'll be tite.
holla back at mine I AM THE AMERICAN DREAM BLOOD, SWEAT, and TEARS |
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