Jay_Dogg vs Ko$ti£
 

ok 10 - 15 lines
no crew, d/r, or hate votes
ill spit first seen as ur newer to this shit than me

Ko$ti£ so you think your name goes bling bling, stop playin with your ding a ling/
takein me on bitch you got it all wrong, ill pound the fuck out you with this song/
i dont even need a beat, this shits all over the street, i aint even rose to my feet/
its goin down with rhythmic style, gonna be around for a while, turn you into a scabby pice of meat/
you know how its done but im through with the fun, kostie its over its done/
save the time and dont even spit, i dont wanna read your wack shit/
more chance of findin a the clit than you winnin this shit, bit ill keap it easy/
incase your shit makes me queasy, i just hope it aint to cheasy/
im bringin the pain, dont even need to start again, but now im done/
n like i said to Da~1 im gonna hunt all all down 1 by 1/
buy maself a new gun cause im gonna be havin shit loads of fun/
but ill lay off now give this kid a chance, before i send him to france/
pice by pice or in a bodybag im dont ill hand the mic to this bitch ass fag/

shit a few misstypes in that oops o well.

u gonna battle or what kostie come on dawg u got till 6'oclock gmt (london) to reply man im doin u a fave here so hall ass bitch.

pice

so ur spitin ur shit with the new guy jay, im jst new to this shit just been on it 1 day, but ill sort u once and for all no need to carry on im gonna make u fall on to ur knees beggn for me to stop ant stoped sayn please well get off ur knees n give me a fight but ull jst fall bak down when i give u a fright u no the shit im going to shit im going to hit u with so no need to spit cause ur jst a load of shit, look at ur record ant nothin give me a month and ull hav a hunch on ur bak no need to smoke crack ull b beggin for me to ask u bak now im done with u no need for the froun ill c u around in a nother town

Uppin this shit for votes man this kid dont know what the fuck he is doin and i thought i was bad

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yo.......

jay-dogg....verse had ok flow, a few punches, lack of creativity is a downer in ure verse but not bad....

kostie.....ure flow just lacked.....n lacked........i cant really say much good but i can tell u what u need to do to elevate....
Work on ure flow structure, try endin a line wit / or - , this way people will get the jist of what ure sayin n how ure flow is...
be more creative, try different words, try making up a few punchlines that r about ure opponent thus calling them 'personals' and with work n elevation you will be coming up with better battle verses. also wok on vocab, now alotta people hit the dictionary wen told this but just listen to some of the better worded rappers (nas,wu-tang,cannibus etc) and you'll pick it up.....

aiight ma vote goes to jay dogg simpley because he had punches and a better overall verse than kostie.....

holla an vote ma battles......FAIRLY....

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Im giving this to Jay because he had punches and his structure was better. You need to work on your flow and structure Kostif. Now hit this up y'all...I need votes
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120624

i agree my vote goes to dogg cuse his flow and struter was way bette than kritie / kritie keep elevating and u will do good need to work on flow my vote/ dogg

Uppin for more votes and dont forget to put your vote on the poll homies

peace

My vote goes to jay, he had better flow and better punches, Ko$ shit was alright just wasnt feeling his structure or flow to much, work on making your lines easier to read man, Vote - Jay

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119323

uppin for more votes come on guys

vote goes to jay dogg

jay that was a pretty weak spit and i think u put better in our battle
ure flow and structure were gud and u opened nice even tho it was just basic. ure punches were gud and hit but they werent the strongest
kostif or whateva that is s'posed to say
i cant say nuthin gud really cuz ure flow wasnt there cuz it was basically a written paragraph, there was no structure to it. u to were usin basic raps and u had no punches at all to do any damage.

both y'all need to elevate u more tho kostif
use better wordplay n vocabs, stop wit the basic and try to get sum originality and creativity in there. multis and personals are always gud.
a gud tip wud to be b4 u battle ure opponent check out their profile and a couple of their battles so u can find shit to use against them!!
hit my battles up playas!!

opener jay
closer jay
vocab tie
flow jay
jay work on vocab man and throw in some more multis good fow ok verse overall
kostie work on structure vocab flow personals andmultis ok verse
vote jay both could use some elevation though

Weak battle.But 2 newbie's,so what can I say?Both of you still need to work,cause if it was against another experienced rapper,you'd both be dead.But this one goes to Jay Dog.What the hell was that revell?You did not really hit Jay hard.Make fun of his name,sig.,and profile.Find anything like that.Same for u Jay.Neither of you had personals.Revell,your opener did not flow.Keep each line around the same # of sllyables.And ur opener,Wash Out?What that all bout.I would give this to easy if I could,cause he did better than both of you.

Vote-Jay Dogg