just a quick keystyle....id appreciate feedback
 

This is what and how it should be//
if you nice then you nice, but your still not nicer than me//
Young Tips Home Where I Rest Nothing Is Better Than the Bean//
catch me postin on the BLOCK with LINES of Fiends//
take a number and what you need i got//
from X,Dope, and coke and a lil bit of pot//
i own my whole block//
my strips on lock//
got lil niggas that i give dollars too looking out for cops//
hoppin out of crown vicks//
these pricks wont surrender till im locked down and shit//
each lil nigga spot a D-Boy try and run up//
gets what ever the fuck they want off the ice cream truck//
i take care of them like the Older Cats did to me//
now im on the block chin up chest out asking "whos as thoro as me?"//
you had your fun but now your time is up//
im not stateing im ill than you but its my time to playboy it up//
all i thought about was to be just like my ulders//
makeing doe chopping niggas heads straight off there shoulders//
niggas didnt learn as much as me so ill fold yah//
your gun pops pebbles my shit throws out boulders//(LoL)
this is Boston where you get locked in a coften for flossin//
so i advise you know your way around my hood you dont wanna get lost in//
i seen niggas get clapt over a dice or domino game//
now im the same shoes just sucked up knolledge into the brain//
i know when to avoid a problem, but just for instance//
most homo thugs start the beef but wont be the ones to finish//
im a PlayBoy slash HuStlaH not a kill, but dont push my buttons//
cuz i aint frontin//
most dudes is bluffing//
talking like that got guns but they really aint bustin nothing//
cuz your the first fagat nigga running to them and snitching us out//
when the D.E.A raid the crib and run in the house//
invadeing privacy of your home a cuttyin the couch//
your lips will be smacking like no other//
they better call up protected custody for you and mother//
how you gangster fam you aint real how you figgure?
the only time you holding STEEL IS WHEN YOUR HOLDING A SHAQ's ACTION FIGURE//........1

damn no feed back whats really good family holla at the kid.......1

Wow No One Really Drops Feed Back Around Here Huh ....1