Ghetto Cripple Vs Da Jokah
 

aihgt rules are...10 line min 30 line max
no d/r or hate votes
no recyclin or bitin
ghetto cripples spits first...

chek in.......

lets do this

when i spill ya ink on the pavement when i pull on my strap///
is the same as spillin' my ink on pages that compete with the illiad///

im'a hit you and run and not because of the repercussions//
leave you lifeless like tupac and noone saw nothin'////

you hit me once and i'll laugh it off///
now im'a start swingin' kid you betta grab yo balls///

you cant even whoop my ass and i got no legs///
you talk mad shit i'll just spit in ya face///
i got beef with this kid, hell, i got beef with the whole game////
i'll melt that ice you be wearin' leave you in a puddle of shame//
fuck what you claim//
i'll shit on your name///
you a loud mutha fucka whose lyrically lame//
you spit down at me bitch with ya cobra slang//
soundin' tame mutha fucka cause you been de-fanged///

we heard ya other diss//
now halla back kid//
and lets see what you halla back with//
i got a hollow baseball bat and a bucket full of acid//
so watch what you say inless you wanna get you ass kicked.

though this is a hard diss i have much respect, thanks for the battle.

Damn...............Thats all i got to say...................

ayo chek dis this nigga steppin up ..he da next on ma merk list//
this cripplez body functions so fucked up he jerked piss//
and dis nigga spit some lil shit and got dick rydaz sayin damn//
and wen it comes to war.. i got nigags prayin man//
and u see dis homie rollin on his chair step back//
cuz u neva kno waat he hidin in his worhtless legs so u betta wish u kept back//
yo babe ruth stop talkin bout base ball and grabbin niggas nuts//
and oh yeah remeber ya biography on how to be stabbin niggas buts//
fuckkin faggit get of this fuckin battle board//
tell me something can ya feet touch tha ground wen u hangin from a straddle cord//
wrap a cord round dis niggas wheel chair and gett ready to roll//
ayo voters up there at tha top of tha page ma names tha jokah therrs tha poll//
u kno waat next vote fo da nigga dat got dis battle on lock//
and even tho u crippled homie...ill still beat cha face in wit da back of da glock//
and laugh well iam doin it and leave ya motionless body in da bak of da block//
and iam not a laundryman ,,but i gotta hide clips in ma sock//
and tha rapp game dont like u homie try out fo some shit like rock//

wun muh fuckah

uppin fo votes.....^^^^^

That shit was close but im gonna go with jokah. Cripple had damn good lines but they didnt hit as hard. Straight up Jokahs punches KILLED this. Jokah some of your lines were a little too long but u hit that nigga hard. Shit was real.

thanx homie uppin fo votes^^^

flow: jokah.
mulit: same
punch: jokah

I gotta give this to him cuz basicly he came in stronger.............and Ghetto..shyt..ur rhymes were ghetto..well they were aight.but not good enough...u gotta keep practicing aight dawg..uppin ur vocab ass well...the same to u jokah

uppin fo votes...............

My vote goes to Jokah on this. His structure and flow were way better, so was his vocab. He had more punches and they hit harder. Ghetto, you need to work on your structure man, get all the lines like the same length and just make it all work together bettah. You had some good shit though, but Jokah won this.

thanx..uppin fo votes....

These cats both had some good shyt.....
I thought that Jokah had better flow, punches and vocab...
Cripples spit was also pretty good... i didnt really like Cripples flow...

My vote is goin to Jokah...

aight man thanx uppin

Criple- Could being betta punches, overall it was ok structure was lil fucked.

J- u killed em wit betta punches some were played but u also get props fo lil creativity.

v/J

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