jmsrep89 vs choppa--city
 

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blind spit no fedding

cheeeeeccccckkkkk INN:::..............................

yo yo fuck it mess around wit young bolling the tec 9 goin have 2 pops have yo mom woke up by 2 knocks on no it da popos tellin her dat her lil boy is dead got that nigga tied up in a body beg cuz im a fucking beast off stage i just started im by book nigga it ya last page. see yo girl wearin yo chain but in da middle of the nite i got her screamin my name cuz im that nigga wit the 04 range carry fort knocks like it pocket change bitch.

yo yo

im bout 2 sweep dis 5-0 like da new jersey nets........
Jack My Spits dats y they calll u a JMS rep........
i spit my flames down yo throat da only way u goin be hott......
please change yo location,nigga u not even known in bedrock.....
throw a book at yo head,cuz yo vocab need inspected.......
imma stand 11-2 y dis bich stand corrected.........
juss cuz we from da same place, dont means u hott enuff 2 call me out......
i throw yo lyrics down yo throat and rip da wacks hit outta yo spout.......
punchlines weak like he a older version of muhammad.......
he shiveran and shaking then dissaperaing lie osima......(bin ladden)
go tutorials and learn wat it takes 2 battle fight......
so come again,,,,,,and learn how 2 type right...........

didnt try but uppin 4 votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

uppin 4 votes










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okok
umm breakdown for jms rep: your strcter was bad u need to fix that it was wack
overall 9/20
bestline:see yo girl wearin yo chain but in da middle of the nite i got her screamin my name cuz im that nigga wit the 04 range carry fort knocks like it pocket change bitch.
that shit was weak

breakdown for choppa-city: 17/20 hes good!
bestline:go tutorials and learn wat it takes 2 battle fight......
so come again,,,,,,and learn how 2 type right...........

DIs is the breakdown......

JMS ur structure was way off you had a couple good lines and ur flow was passing but you need to work on structure
Spit 9/20

Choppa yo shit was hott dogg nice punches and OK flow. structure was koo too
Spit 17/20

VOTE = CHOPPA CITY

I voted on yallz battle now return the favor and whoever i didnt vote on .......vote on my battles and ill return the fava( HERES THE LINK)

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121076

up up up up up up up up it uppp uppin 4 votes........

Damn this battle was one sided
Jms your shit was whack striaght up
your opener wasnt hott at all i got bored readin your shit
bestline-didnt like any

Choppa -Real nice drop like your personals and punches hit way harder
then the other katz-used some nice vocab and strcu was nice

Best line-i spit my flames down yo throat da only way u goin be hott......
please change yo location,nigga u not even known in bedrock.....
ending could of been better though

Flow:choppa
punches:choppa
Multis:choppa
structure:jms..

choppa had this match easily won.. he had no structure but the flow made up for that... punches was tehre to finish it off

I AGREE WITH MY BOY DELEON CAN YALL VOTE AND MINE
Damn this battle was one sided
Jms your shit was whack striaght up
your opener wasnt hott at all i got bored readin your shit
bestline-didnt like any

Choppa -Real nice drop like your personals and punches hit way harder
then the other katz-used some nice vocab and strcu was nice

Best line-i spit my flames down yo throat da only way u goin be hott......
please change yo location,nigga u not even known in bedrock.....
ending could of been better though