Dawgfatha Vs Da Jokah
 

ok man da rules is
10 line min---30 line max
u spit first
due 30 mins
no d/r or hate votes
no bitin or recyclin

wun

chekin in..one

man i aint gon beat you i prepared da wackiest shit
lol damn nigga you gon merk me so easy.anyways here it goes

you rhyme like a freestylin CLOWN//
im pretty sure i aint da only one wantin ta chase you outta TOWN//
allotta people call ya a masta//
i think they mean a masta of disasta//
i got yo name AND yo numba//
i comin afta you//
dun worry ma motherfuckin aim IS true//
keep runnin city to city//
i know ill catch you i aint in a hurry//
even if you may be innocent//
i gotta dispose of you cause you cause too much embarassment//
so dun worry i aint FAR behind//
i hope you aint tha nigga thatll mind//
from da way you rap it seems yous thinks yous a slicksta//
but remember dis.....you CANT fuck wit ME nigga//

damn that was wack
put me outta ma misery homey.and plz,do it quick

dat was from da top of my head right here right now.i hope i get at least one vote.lol

aight dawg bfor u give ya self a heart attack get cha shit in order//
u from canada eh!! iam from tha states iam across da border//
and dis fool got ma numbah..but he dont wanna call long distance//
cuz he a cheap nigga..and on april 27th is wen u got napped and u havnt been missed since//
and ya moms or pops dont care cuz u was a mistake//
i got money flowing every were its like i piss cake//
and i spit fire like a dragon..but wash up urs like doin tha dishes//
doin drive bys in a wagon..and cap all u lil canadian bitches//
yo ill make sure i dont spit to much fire so ya igloo dont melt//
ayo chek iam a stop soon cuz burnin hurts and i dont want u to feel waat i felt//
and ma throat startin to hurt i think i need some halls//
oh shit dis niggas a gangsta he put graphiti in some stalls//
ayo dont shoot wit cha glocks full of papa clipz//
and ill have ma bulletts "grindin" wit cha bones like dat 2 man crew clipsez//

wun muh fuckah..

uppin fo votez,.,,

Jokah all the way... Yo he had a good flow, nice rhymes, and yeah... Dawg i dont think you were trying.... anyways.. if you were elevate that man... anyways

Vote - Jokah

aight uppin fo votes^^^^^^

Really one-sided........
DF
structure 6/10
flow 6/10
punchlines 7/10
creativity 6/10
total 25
Your skill was too, and I mean too simple. Work on it.

DJ

structure 8/10
flow 7/10
punchlines 8/10
creativity 7/10
total 30
DJ got this one, but you need to add metaphors in your work.

vote DJ

aight uppin for votes...one..

aiight da jokah put it down in this battle his punches were bettr his overall effort was better he murked this cat i really like the opener and closer

aight man uppin ^^^.......

DA JOKAH

Open 7/10
Close 8/10
Rhymes 8/10
Flow 7/10
Punches 8/10
38/50

Dawgfatha
OPEN 6/10
CLOSE 6/10
Rhymes7/10
Flow 7/10
Punches 6/10
32/50

VOTE JOKAH