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discharge vrs. Young_H
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no d/r no crew votes no feeding he spits first |
freestyle against discharge
Yo sumbody please tell me dis wack ass nigga Discharge didn't jus instant message Young H/talkin bout do u wanna battle?..dude let me break it down ya not ready to battle against me/your not ready for what im'a do to u lyrically/so dont be gettin all up in mah face fake ass gangsta need to stick to preachin like mase/dont come flappin ya gums off at me/i'll have my F.L.G. niggaz lay u up in da I.C.U. eatin tylenol 3's,hooked up to lots of IV's and life support fightin for ya life tryin to breathe/dawg ya not worthy of challengin Young H if i catch u slippin im'a rearrange your face/find out where u live ride by 'n' shoot up ur place/then i'll go get ur mom give her more shots to da face then jenna jameson/i don't give a fuck what crew ya in don't take it personal dun we jus freestyle battlin/but ya battlin the illest,this is for all my niggaz put ya drinks in da air if u feelin this/i'm shittin all over this man this nigga have a better chance of goin to Afghanistan 'n' tryin freestyle battle the taliban/damn man i didn't wanna do this to ya but shyt to tell the truth im kinda glad/dis guy calls himself discharge i hope hes wearing a pad/when it comes to battlin Young H the best i suggest dis nigga discharge invest in a bullet proof vest/no make that a life insurance policy/cuz F.L.G. like the naitzes we droppin bodies/
Holla...thass it im not makin this nigga anymore famous it's over -1- |
your ryhmes are like "snuggles" they soft,shit you should no that you already lost//
this is one mistake you made that will cost,second line and i allready finished you off// you sayin shit like "u tha boss", "the boss" just got his ass tossed// you not gonna win even if you prey graspin tha cross, ur ryhmes arent hott,they growin frost// lets raise the bar and higher the stakes,virginia aint real mc's just fucking fakes// you and your ryhmes are "fragile", they break, my ryhmes are too much for u to intake// you couldnt beat me if u used my ryhmes in a "remake",your weak,already startin to shake// my ryhmes are so sweet ill put the icing on tha cake,u already lost fates-fate// skillz-is-what you lack,your weak like peter-pan against shaq// as-a-matter-of-fact you should be a proffeser at the institute of rap wack// see as u kno u lost this match,my ryhmes are just straight up cash// nextime just relax,dotn come to rapbattles with your fucking trash// |
Young H u NEED TO ELAVATE WAYYYYYY Higher man ur not at da TOP OF Ur level u Need MUCH better Flow Rhymes And Structure well for a N00B ur AVRAGE but u NEED to ELAVTE Dogg ur Rap 6.3/10
Discharge u Did Way Better then YOUNG H its like Young h it was a First time steppin in to the dome of BATTLEiNg ur structure is a LIL weak but For everything else u did Exelent 8.5/10 i say Young H Open 5/10 Close 6/10 Rhymes 6/10 Punches 5/10 Structure 2/10 24/50 Discharge Open 8/10 Close 9/10 Rhymes 8/10 Punches 9/10 Structure 7/10 41/50 Good WORK Guys but DISCHARGE Pull THe WIN Best Lines skillz-is-what you lack,your weak like peter-pan against shaq// as-a-matter-of-fact you should be a proffeser at the institute of rap wack// see as u kno u lost this match,my ryhmes are just straight up cash// nextime just relax,dotn come to rapbattles with your fucking trash// YOUNG_H BEST LINE: NONE |
ok heres my breakdown: young_H you did sweet for your first battle,but fix ya structure
overall: 19/30 betline:/no make that a life insurance policy/cuz F.L.G. like the naitzes we droppin bodies/ that was tight ok discharge u beat hiss ass but your not as new man step up and battle somebody good pick on some1 yor own size like me!! breakdown:24/30 solid verse but bad structure best line:skillz-is-what you lack,your weak like peter-pan against shaq// as-a-matter-of-fact you should be a proffeser at the institute of rap wack// see as u kno u lost this match,my ryhmes are just straight up cash// nextime just relax,dotn come to rapbattles with your fucking trash// if u dont like what im sayin bout you then battle me |
hahah u thin you gotta chance at battelin me ahah yea right bitch
wre u serious?? haha |
H u need some damn work on your structure. Other than not rhyming shit was hard to read. Neither of u had good flow but discharge was better. I wasnt feelin this battle i thought u could have both done a lot better. Punches didnt go hard but i think that goes to discharge too.
Vote Discharge Return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121115 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121083 |
OMG young H wat da hell wat u thinkin dis was a lop sided battle discharge ripped dis fool
check it out dicaharge-nice flow nice punches way betta structure bestline-your ryhmes are like "snuggles" they soft,shit you should no that you already lost// this is one mistake you made that will cost,second line and i allready finished you off// ^^ won da battle wit dat line ^^ worsteline-none young H-bestline-didnt have 1 worsteline-yo whole verse ^^ but its ite i use 2 be like dat u a elavate homie winner-discharge |
LOL^^^ dis battle dont need a big explination..
opener-dis structure-dis...hands down punchlines-dis wordplay-dis personals-dis enjoyed-dis.....dis shit was wun sided da other dudes bars wasn't even ryhmin.... myvote-dis RETURN DA FAVOR...LINKS IS IN MY SIG |
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