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Afterword vs. Accomplishment....
YO you know da rules....
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4 show im checkin-in just to let u know im here
ill drop as soon as i can= like wen my manager leaves b/c im at werk let the best "word" win peace |
oh ok then yo i'ma just go to sleep its twelve thirty drop in da morn i will pce
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Yo... Accomplishment new Crew holla ya dead kid... Yo..Afterword...your not known,..i might use them words...but your still a no-name... even if you mixed "coke..wit rogaine"..you still could'nt be a"head" of the "dope-game".../ gotcha convulsin like epeleptics...my crew names my style..cuz i'm rappin wit murderous methods... Yeah..I don't know you.. i called him a fag...jeese he's easily offended.../ I don't call you cannibalistic..cuz i break ya mandible by shovin my fist in it... punches flammible like a gasoline mic...ignites when i begin to spit...in-it.../ crew like "get em"...i aint gonna fight her...waiten for a main-course...not this appitizer... this kid despises me...its cuz i'm young...yet so much wiser.../ my shit is tight...wearin ray bahns while readin my verse...couldn't shade my inner light... your a beginner right?...cuz ya verse is hiding...like six year olds, on devils night.../ |
dogg im my badd
ive been extremely busy but this is my check-in |
yo, yo...
............check-it dogg I spit hot shit non-stop, like I'm shootin off a whole round yur a clown, who parades with different crews to hold-u-down you use to ryhme clas-sic, but it got drastic so u, fill-da-void quik u got yur ass whipped, so fuck yur last clique, now u ridin killah bwoy's dick (killah,is his former as of yesterday crew member, who served him prior to his arrival to Lyrical Destruction.) I'm beatin you with my eyes closed, so you know, I-got-aim you couldnt bring Lyrical Destruction, if u wrote on a high-jacked-plane (this cat already changed his crew again, that quik) you kant fuckin see me u weiney im a distant solar-system after this yur fam will be grievin, like theres a U.S. soldier-missin LAST WORDS: YOU SPEAK NON-SENSE SO CONSTANT THAT..... YOU SOUND LIKE A BACKWARDS SPINNING RECORD IVE SEEN YA RYHMES & YUR BEST ACCOMPLISHMENT IS...... HIDING A WACK RAPPER, BEHIND A WINNING RECORD who gives a phuck about the outcome cuz this guy iz a crew d/r "nothin personal" peace |
Damn that was a good battle. I liked both of those verses shit is hard to decide. Both had good punches, flow was alright but nothing special. In the end i think word came with more personal shit. Other than that shit was a tie and they were both good. But i thought word had the better punches so he gets my vote
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haha ok uppin for votes no problem.... yo
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uppin for votes
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zzzzzzzzz..... don't sleep on dis shit votes......
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I like both verses.Both had a nice fl.ow/structure.But punches would have to go to accomplishg ment.Afterworld,ur punches were okay,but it was too simple.You got add more complexy to it
Vote accomplishment. http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...536#post1254536 ^^^vote |
lmaooo yo aint really no explanation 4 dis shit after u got merked nigga
opener-acc...dat was it dunn ya opener won da battle structure-a tie punchlines-acc...oded on after with dos multi's-acc..hands down personals-acc enjoyed-acc...dis was aeasy wun 4 u dunn aint no explanation 4 dis wun my vote-acc...return dat favor dunny's links r in my sig |
yo drop a response yall
if u want us to return da favor its an eye 4 an eye uppin |
^^^basically ou vote for him he'll vote for u...D/R vote swaying upppiin for votes... and hit up my leauge battle
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upping for votes man....................... zzzzzzzzzzzz chomon
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