strictly the truth no twist n turns
 

im turnin into a legend while niggas still tryna be the greatest
although im unsigned majority niggas hate this
while im in the studio niggas tryna break this
i already know it it a fact imma be the #1
once i get it aint no turnin back i aint doin this shit for fun
i took after tupac slangin rocks tryna get some pay
but cause i spit fly rhymes i deal wit the same shit everyday
other mcs stay on my back instead of handlin their own
im only 16 but fuck my age shit im grown
fuck the princess of hip hop im the mother fuckin queen
i stay on top n im blowin up the scene
now look back at my crew shit im exploiting my team
look at the blood in my eyes im a hip hop fein
i rap for 1 reason thats to blow off steam
this shit is just delicious it taste like ppeaches n creme
i stay posted up on the wall doin the gangsta lean
it feels rel good to rock the ice that gleam
im down for my crew its in my gene
i can punch u in ya dome n make ya feel it in ya spleen
everytime i pick up a mic niggas swear im a gimmick
but tell me why they start runnin everytime that i spit it
n everytime i drop a album they the first ones to get it
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a lil somethin to make my spot in this forum its not my best but its still tight
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nice shyt breezy feelin it gurl nice wordplay in that keep em comin holla bak ~1~

can i get some feedback

thanks cuz

feed back plz u do me a favor n ill return yours

yo this shit was aight there was some simple rhymes there but for a chick this shit was tite. Up the vocab and rhymes, and the flow was aight.



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holla @ ya girl wit some feedback

Good drop the rhymes were kinda basic but you had great worplay and good flow so only thing I'd say is up the vocab other than that your shit was hot, it'd be a really good track for a femcee, keep dropping!

yeah i'm feelin your flow. Hot shit...keep it comin

good lookin darkman ill return the fav

in the mean time i need more feedback