True playa VS sliemmy
 

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no hate votes

you drop fiirst

yo let me introduce myself its slimmey the kid/
yo watch as i play with this guy like his a double D tit/
i see this is your first time so ur like the new virgin on this site/
but i wont take it easy ill make u bleed, i ryde hard on the mic/
so u say ur a true player ur the tru mac huh now we know ur a liar/
u wouldnt be on the net ur b hittin every girl in the church choir/
im sorry my nigger but im aladin and this is my arabian dream/
u fight hard and brave but u lose my victory's already forseen/
10 lines is all u need dats all no need for another/
but ill end it on good terms have a nice day my brother.

now u spit blud. good luck. keep the votes fair. holla bk

where u at dogg

True playa, put layas of hits from my fist to your face baseing you wit my lines bitch the only way you could have good taste I got spits hotter then mase for yes retna's so read on if this kid slim think he beating me then boy dream on cuz my words peirce yes throughts like hollows through to flow knocking you out with hits, you be feelin tipsy to pass out like J Kwan.
An this kid is true pussy
you can get mad but you wouldn;t be a man to Mrs. Swan!

get the votes droppin plz ................

yo vote 4 this battle and ill vote 4 yall

drop sum votes plz and i swear i'll holla bk at yall

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121492

^^^vote in mines,since I boted in ur's.

OKAY,playa,you had absolutley no flow or structure.Slimmey on the other hand did.Punches were weak playa.Slimmey had a couple OK ones.My favoeite is the one bout playa being new virgin on site.But playa,that one but K-Kwon,was whack.

Vote-Slimmy

thanxs shady ill vote on urs. keep the votes coming yall

plz vote ill vote on urs jus at holla at me

so u say ur a true player ur the tru mac huh now we know ur a liar/
u wouldnt be on the net ur b hittin every girl in the church choir/

this line killed it,

very poor battle, both mc's need to work on metaphor and multies and deffinately on vocab

v/ slim

Slimmey:
yo let me introduce myself its slimmey the kid/
yo watch as i play with this guy like his a double D tit/
-not a nice starter
i see this is your first time so ur like the new virgin on this site/
but i wont take it easy ill make u bleed, i ryde hard on the mic/
-nice bar

True playa:
nuttin was nice... u had BAD structure.. no punches and no flow

vote obviously is with slimmey

slimey got this easy playa ya structure is fucked up need to make that shti readable and wor kon bringin good punchs and personals and getti ncreative while usi nwordplay in your verse just keep elevatin and slimey you need to take acouple of hints to and elevate to

wtf Playa that was horrid no flow or anything slimmy had a few punches

Slimmey=6/10
Playa=(-3)/10